RE: World Wide Cypher Jam!! Round 23-@TermiteMusic-Metal Boat/R.E.D.-Late Night Cruise

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World Wide Cypher Jam!! Round 23-@TermiteMusic-Metal Boat/R.E.D.-Late Night Cruise

in thecut •  7 years ago 

More fire! I really liked the rhyme scheme with “-ight”. Nice. Just one suggestion though, articulate better. I guess this could be because you weren’t too familiar with your verse. Otherwise, good job.

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Thank you, really appreciate ones input truly!! Yea I definitely need to work on that a little and I find it is also due to not having a good mic, or knowing a lot about recording vocals in general. Also working on that!! Lots to do!

Keep them coming!