The Island, Episode 4 (sudden death)steemCreated with Sketch.

in theisland •  7 years ago 

The island is a rhyming adventure, where YOU choose what happens next! Simply read the episode, and then post what you think should come next as a comment. The comment that gets the most votes will become part of the story. Catch up on previous episodes by visiting #TheIsland

All suggestions will be put into a random number generator. One will be chosen as fatal. More suggestions mean more chances of survival.

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Previously
To reach the box, you'll need to swim...
...but something grabs you on your limb.

Episode 4
The sudden shock makes you feel sick
You jump, and draw your knees up, quick
You look towards the ocean's sand
And see a bony flesh-stripped hand

This can't be someone from your crew
Had others crashed and died here, too?
You're sure you see its finger twitch...

Write your final line suggestion in the comments, and then vote for your favourite suggestion. You might want to check back in for new suggestions later - especially if you're the first to post! But beware... the story moves on every 24 hours. The comment with most votes will decide where the story goes next.

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Good lord, what's next, an island-witch?!

Your line directed the story this time

Then point at you, like you're a snitch.

Your suggestion was fatal. Good job it didn't get chosen!

Haha! A lucky escape!

Stomp down, break bones, you don't care which

The most logical option by far