ŞİİR: DARDANEL TON

in tr •  7 years ago  (edited)

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Eren YILDIZ 21 yaşında. İstanbul'da yaşıyor
ve 7 aydır şiir yazıyor. Bu şiiri severek yediği
Dardanel Ton'a ithaf etmiş.

Değmeyin Keyfime

Levreği çipurası hikaye
Bayılırım ben balık yemeye..
Hele birde balık ton ise,
Değmeyin KALVAS'ın keyfine.

Eve geldiğimde kendime,
Açarım bir konserve
Salataya boca edince,
Değmeyin KALVAS'ın keyfine.

Biter 2 günde, 4'lü paket
E haliyle takviye hacet.
Ama promosyonu görünce
Değmeyin KALVAS'ın keyfine.

Küçüğü 80 gram, büyüğü 120
Ama süzersen kalmaz hiç bişi.
Makarnaya boca edince,
Değmeyin KALVAS'ın keyfine.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Ton ton ton Dardanel ton dediler
    Şu garibe 2 balığı çok gördüler
    Verseler koli koli Levrekle Alpine
    Değmeyin KALVAS'ın keyfine :)

    Hoşuma gitti katılmak istedim,devamını bekliyorum :)

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Ton ton vermezseniz KALVAS'a
    Kendi gider tutar bolca
    Bir de kova dolunca
    Değmeyin KALVAS'ın keyfine

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Ayçiçekyağının içinde yüzmesine gönderme yapmamış. Büyük eksiklik.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Süzmeyi tercih ederim ya, süzmeden çıtlattım hafif

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Gerçekten eksik bir şiir. ayçiçek yağına değinilmemiş

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              ·  7 years ago 

            davnvotet.

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                ·  7 years ago 

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Ahahaha... O son bakış nedense bir Sezen Aksu şarkısı hatırlattı😉

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Hemen altına linklesene egemen abi iyi dedin..

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                      ·  7 years ago 

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                        ·  7 years ago 

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        Ayçiçek yağı seni büyük hayal kırıklığına uğrattı ya :D

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        21 seneden fazla olmadı mı? hala o en eski reklamları kulağımda çınlıyor ton ton dardenel ton.

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          zeytin yağlısıda var oda yağ ama kaliteli yağ :=)

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