Tenerifemanitou (35) in travel • 6 years ago (edited)A Haiku: Sunshiny coastline. A private, shinny yacht swims enjoying the sky. travel nature photography life poetry
Carefree, nice haiku. Again nicely extracted moment. But, is it "funny" appriopriate word for haiku, given its mandatory no-metaphors shape?
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I agree, but it's funny that you are the only one with a constructive critique!
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Ah, really? Steemit should be place for constructive critique, right? Thank you, anyway!
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