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Carefree, nice haiku. Again nicely extracted moment. But, is it "funny" appriopriate word for haiku, given its mandatory no-metaphors shape?

I agree, but it's funny that you are the only one with a constructive critique!

Ah, really? Steemit should be place for constructive critique, right? Thank you, anyway!