Before Breakdown !!

in true-poetry •  7 years ago 

True Poetry
Before Breakdown


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Voices descend from the edges
Got in water
Did not reach you
Heard the water does not return the sound
Maybe for this reason
Or teaches practicality
Choose silence, watch the scene
Two steps back
Maybe watching a drowning scene
Or give the last shock
Forget me but do not know why
That will stand up with unintended
Some strangers
That will return life
Mountain height
Will forget my face
The river flowing in the mountains
Time opened eyes
Lent weight of shoulders
Minded hard after every no,
The sensation is back till late
The noise in the heart
Is the noise of questions
Any explanation spreads
To the capacity of sight
That the inhaled breath is dripping melts
Before breakdown
Remember some unknowingly face
Who is blind
With my own time
Also the wound and ointment
The medication too.

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