🏠 Mysterious Old House

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My name is Naura. Right now I'm studying at a university with my close friend, Rona. My campus is not too far from home. About 300 meter more.

I am a quiet type of person. The reason is because I have a special ability. An abominable ability. When I was little, I've seen the old lady on the street corner near Grandma's house. The old lady is not human. It is a frightening creature. His face was broken, his body was scrawny, and from behind her hair looks dozens or maybe even hundreds of white caterpillars so ripple tearing the contents of his head. Not only that. My beautiful eyes also often see little children with plump-headed heads in elementary school first. They are often called tuyul. The numbers are many and often invite me to play. Because that's it, I was shunned friends because of my quirky habit of playing '' alone '' in the field. Yet they all did not know that I was accompanied by many friends from other realms.


Next to the campus building is a pretty old house. The house has not been occupied since 2002. Rumor has it that there are frequent things beyond reason. Terrible incident has been experienced by a family move from Solo. They only last for a week. According to the testimony of a maid, he often suffers from distractions. Starting from a mysterious knocking sound, kitchen utensils read alone, to the extreme of a sharp knife almost stuck in his back.

Most horrible distractions occur during heavy rain. All the inhabitants of the house are really in the grip of fear. Their baby boy suddenly cramped, the maid screamed hysterically, and the employer's mother was harassed by a veteran ghost's soul.
Since the tragedy, the house was finally emptied and left to age aged. But somehow, in my eyes the house always looks beautiful and majestic. I also never see any unseen figure. Maybe this is luck for me. I must be very afraid to see the form of the creature.


The sky looked somewhat gloomy. On the balcony of your house I'm silent. Drinking a drink through a straw about 3 millimeters wide. The wind blows pretty hard. Makes me Turn abruptly toward an empty house near the campus.

Still the same as before. The house looks luxurious. Whereas people often say, '' The empty house is very haunted and shabby ''. I do not know, maybe the eternity of the luxury of the house is very strong.

Drink me out without me realizing. I just smiled amused. Daydream turns me out of the way of what I'm doing. The straw still stuck to my mouth. I bit my little bite. Then the straw I took, from passing through the gap I directed to the empty house.

First, there is nothing. Secondly, I started closing my left eye. Slowly the vision becomes blurry. What I'm doing is really unexpected.

I saw a horrible woman stretch out her hand. Pull my eyes until I'm unconscious. When I woke up, I was somewhere. The Ancient Room with dim light. Classic home appliances. Old paintings. As well as a blazing fireplace.

'' Jangaaan ..! ''
I was surprised when I heard a scream. I turned around. From the stairs, I saw a middle-aged woman being tortured by an old man. Her face flooded with tears. His clothes were torn and there were scratches on his back. While the old man cruelly slapped her down on the floor.

'' Watch out If you complain to Mistress! I'll kill you! '' Shouted the old man. While the woman who appears to be a maid was just sobbing.

('' I littered him ...! '')

A whisper is heard by the ear. I turned around. No one. Suddenly, I felt a huge headache. Until I fell unconscious. 'No! Stop Bi! Poor Mama .. ''
I woke up to the sound of hysterical shouting. I faintly saw a woman lying covered in blood. In the corner of the room, I also saw the figure of a beautiful girl half sitting sluggish while hugging the knee.

'' Is not that the woman ..? '' I muttered to myself.

('' Yes I have to finish my own master '')

Back A whisper sounds in the ear.
"Mr and Mrs, I have done everything. The pain is finally comparable. Forgive me '' said the woman who holds a sharp knife.

'' I must also kill your daughter '' he said again. This time his face became frightened with a trace of cruelty.

'' I'm sorry Bibi! ''

''Do not!''

'' Not Bi Diah! Do not! Aldira fear ''


'' Nai ..! Nai ..! Naira ..! ''

I was startled. The glow of the lights greeted my eyes. I'm celingukan. Next to me is the Great, Kalia and Rona. They were looking at me in amazement.

'' I Why? ''
'' You just fainted know, lucky I saw to the balcony '' said Raya. Rona then provide drinking water. Without thinking I gulped the water.

'' You guys Tau empty house there? '' I asked. Three girls in front of me nodded.
'' Earlier, I fainted because someone pulled me into a period where the house is still inhabited by the original owner ''

Hear my words Rona, Raya, and Kalia surprised. They came closer to me.

'' The house is haunted because there used to be an incident. The maids there are littered with their masters '' I began to explain. The third eye of my friend widened.

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From that day on, I got sick. My body is limp, hot and painful here and there. For a week more I was lying in the hospital. My thoughts drift, imagine tragic events in empty homes. I heard the news that the empty house had been destroyed because of the interests of the city government. I closed my eyes as I reached the yard. When I open my eyes, I see four human figures. That one, the veteran guy.

While standing next to his wife.

And beside the girl is a tragic fate. Reduced Masters themselves, until finally the grudge has blinded the conscience.

All of them smile at me. Waved and slowly began to fade like fog smoke. While me. Still silent, stunned silently. Tears dripping down the cheeks.

'' May you all calm down there ''


The hot sun burns the skin. I ran to a big tree by the lake. Looking at the atmosphere around me, I sat on the roots of the towering tower. Wagging a hand, suddenly a little girl came up to me.

'' Brother Alone here? '' He asked innocently.
'' Yeah, you alone too huh? '' I asked back. She smiled sweetly at me, then she turned toward the lake.

'' I Same my family Kak, it's them! '' He replied as he held up his finger. I smiled, then looked into the lake.
Instantly, my body trembled. Cold sweat began to wet. The tongue is as stiff as unable to say. What this little girl shows is her family.

They All look at me. Waving an unsightly hand.
'' Sis! My name is Princess! Which sister's name? ''
The voice of the little girl next to me is ...

His face ...

His body ...

It turns out he ...

'' This is a sucking drink of Brother, right? ''

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