More birds than fit expansive skies
Arcing above me.
Wings cast abstract shadow paintings.
This is my submission for the Ukiah contest by
@japhofin8or
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Prompts for this Challenge:
8-5-8 syllable count
BIRDS
Your Ukiah must follow the prompts for this challenge.
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I love the idea behind the poem but line two needs to be shortened to 5 syllables. It has 7 now.I will look back before I make a decision to see if you have edited it to fit. Good luck in the challenge!
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I must be completely blind LOL thanks for pointing out the obvious out. <3
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wow... what a beautiful. i like your post to much. thanks for share the post.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
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I'm checking you out!
But I count 10 - 7 - 8 for your syllables. Please forgive me if I am overstepping.
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Not at all, I edited lol
Thanks so much!
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this reminds me of Plato's cave, the people who see shadows and believe them reality. there is a depth here, a thought that these birds are leaving imprints of themselves from the expansive skies not only through their shadows, but in the eyes and mind of the narrator.
the shadows of a gorgeous memory, @wandrnrose7, you have shown us here. thank you so much for sharing.
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