Ecstasy

in upvoteforupvote •  7 years ago  (edited)

The blatherings of the wind
Whistle, a meaning
When it morphs her black hair.

The tranquil of a flower
Breathes, a beauty
When it reposes her ear.

The melody of the rain
Drums, a song
When she pirouettes in it.

Nature allures my vision when it duos with her.

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I can hear the song and you made nature more beautiful than it already is. Really nice poem. Tip!

Thank you so much, it is too big a compliment to say I made nature more beautiful. I think, the subject referred to in this poem makes it exquisite for me. Thank you for the tip. :)

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Nice

you have a way with words, keep it up ! following

Thank you, so much. Followed you back.

What I personally really like about your writing style, after browsing your posts a bit. Is you add this almost natural like melody. There's almost like a rhythm where in your third sentence of every rhyme I almost hear a music note from it.

Hope to read more and thanks for posting. (:

Thanks man, I decided to write it in a rhythm. It's really motivating to see such a great comment on my work. Thanks again. :)

Very good poem, well written :)

Thank you, so much. :)