Thank you for your contribution to Utopian.
I appreciate your efforts, but I think there are still quite a few areas where you could improve your work.
On the content side, much like your previous submission, there's very little there there. It's a story of your experience using an open source application suite, but it tells us nothing about the suite itself. Plus, it's the Google apps. I'm hard pressed to think what new information or insight can be delivered on the topic in 2019. I'd love to be proven wrong, but that would take significant expertise. Before posting, I would urge you to consider two questions: What unique value am I bringing to readers? What unique value am I bringing to the open source project?
On the presentation side, I'm certainly happy to see the shorter, clearly separated, paragraphs. The writing, however, still needs a lot of work. Near the end of my weekly report on the Blog category, I have tips for writers. I suggest that you read them.
Specifically, I'll point out that "lesser apps" means "apps that aren't as good," not "not as many apps." You would have been better served by writing "fewer apps."
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Thank you for your review, @didic! Keep up the good work!
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