Hello, @cuteflames!
Thank you for your contribution to Utopian. I certainly agree with you that keeping hydrated is crucial for your health and well-being, and this is a very useful project that allows users to monitor their intake of water and other fluids with precision. Your health is your wealth as they say, so I'm always interested in applications that help people develop a healthier lifestyle.
Your review is comprehensive, rather informative and well-illustrated with relevant visuals, and your content is unique and editorial. You managed to create an interesting blog post that analyzes the key features of this tool, and contains valuable insights into your personal thoughts and experiences. This is the kind of content we like to see in blog posts; keep up the good work.
That said, your review did have issues of grammar and style, but not to the level where it hurt the reading experience. I'd be happy to cite a few examples in a follow-up comment, if you wish. Nevertheless, you did a really good job of providing useful information about this project and your personal experience with it, and I appreciate the effort.
I look forward to your next contribution.
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I would very much like to see my corrections. Although, your comments contrast greatly with the review score given
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I will cite a few examples:
This sentence should read: "That is, if you are trying to lose or add weight, it can help in achieving that."
This one should read: "The developers of aqua droid came up with a scintillating idea to enable us to drink the minimum amount of water needed for a healthy life", or even "The developers of aqua droid came up with a scintillating idea to enable us to drink an adequate amount of water."
This one should read: "the app achieves its main aim of ensuring one gets to be more aware of their water intake."
Now, regarding your remarks:
I went over everything once again and I still think I scored it correctly. Could you please explain?
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Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!
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