Hey cuteflames,

Thank you for your contribution to the Waistline project.

I appreciate the information provided about the uses, features, and your experiences with it. I have read a few reviews Waistline, and I think the app is useful. I never planned to download it, but I clicked on the link you added, and it got downloaded on my device. :)

You did great on the content side. The post is editorial and unique. However, I had a few issues with it.

First, when choosing a topic, you need to make it clear. Writing a series is good, but it is necessary you add the name of the app in the title section.

On the presentation side, you also did great. The post is well-structured and informative. However, the post had many superfluous words. When you are expressing yourself, you don’t need to make your texts verbose. You could keep it simple and clear. I will cite an example.

Personally, for me, I do think that the issues regarding weight-loss or weight gain are according to individual preferences and there’s no particular standard as to what the perfect human is supposed to look like.

Here, you are ‘’personally’’, still for you and you do. Those are unnecessary. Always try to keep your sentences short and clear. Copy, and paste that on Hemingway to check its readability.

Also, there are some inconsistencies in your texts. There is one in the sentence above. ‘’preferences and there’s no particular ‘’. After the conjunction ‘’and’’ ‘’there’s no’’ made the sentence confusing. I would advise you dedicate more time to proofread your texts.

Thanks

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