Hey cuteflames,

Thank you for your contribution. The Screenstream seems like another cool project, and it is nice to see it get some attention.

The post is extensive, well-illustrated, and informative. I appreciate the detailed description of the features and the uses of the app. However, there are areas I like to address.

As you have said, the app does not have loads of features, and you decided to write about every aspect of the app. It is good, but to make it better, when you are reviewing an app that does not have loads of features, it would be better you keep your post simple, than to stuff it up with unnecessary information.

Further, on the presentation side, I appreciate the short sentences. I checked the texts on Hemingway, and it was ranked 4. Good score. However, some are fragment sentences, and they are confusing. Also, the post had many proofreading issues. I would advise you to dedicate more time to proofread your texts.

Thanks!

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