Dicen que un dia la mentira y la verdad se encontraron.
la mentira dijo a la verdad:
-Buenos dias, doña verdad
Y la verdad fue a comprobar si realmente era un buen dia. Miró hacia arriba no vio nubes de lluvia, varios pajaros cantaban y viendo que realmente era un buen dia contesto:
-Buenos dias, doña mentira.
-Hace mucho calor hoy, dijo la mentira.
Y la verdad al ver que la mentira decia la verdad, se relajó.
La mentira invito a la verdad a bañarse en el rio. Se quito la ropa, salto al agua y dijo:
- Venga doña verdad, el agua esta deliciosa.
Y una vez que la verdad sin dudar de la mentira se quito la ropa y se lanzó al agua, la mentira salio del agua y se vistio con la ropa de la verdad y a su vez la verdad se nego a vestirse con la ropa de la mentira y por no tener de que avergonzarse, salio desnuda caminando por la calle. desde entoncesa los ojos de las personas, era mas facil aceptar la mentira vestida de verdad que la verdad desnuda y cruda
They say that one day the lie and the truth met.
the lie told the truth:
-Good morning, doña verdad
And the truth was to check if it really was a good day. He looked up and saw no rain clouds, several birds were singing and seeing that it really was a good day I answered:
-Good morning, lady lie.
-It is very hot today, said the lie.
And the truth to see that the lie told the truth, relaxed.
The lie invites the truth to bathe in the river. He took off his clothes, jumped into the water and said: - Come true, the water is delicious.
And once the truth without doubt of the lie took off his clothes and threw himself into the water, the lie came out of the water and dressed in the clothes of truth and in turn the truth refused to dress with the clothes of the lie and because she did not have to be ashamed, she went naked walking down the street. since then in the eyes of people, it was easier to accept the truth-clad lie than the naked and raw truth
Vaya, @pedroelec, amigo. No sé si tu intención era escribir una historia en versos o unos versos con una historia, pero me gustó mucho cómo has manejado todo el asunto de cómo se nos presenta la mentira en la vida.
Realmente no sabría decir si es realmente esto un poema, pero sé que he leído algunos poemas infantiles que tiene este estilo. Tiene como función educar a los niños en lo moral y ético. La cosa es que la mayoría que he leído tiene una rima, y el tuyo no lo tiene (eso me gusta más, no me llevo bien con la rima). Sin embargo, es un trabajo muy bueno el que presentas, excelente.
Saludos.
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Hola @spavan697. De verdad muchas gracias por detenerte a leer este trabalengua, verdaderamente mas que un poema me dedique mas a que fuera un trabalengua divertido de leer, y a su vez dejar plasmado en una corta historia una de muchisimas maneras de ver como se presenta la verdad y la mentira... De nuevo gracias, me siento complacido que haya sido de tu agrado.
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