🎬 HELP! Work in Progres! Opinions needed :)

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Hi, fellow steemians! I don't have a habit of communication so much here, but right now I'm doing this little project, and I have a fear that it's maybe a bit cheesy, so I would love if you would give me opinions about that.

So, as some of you know, I made this video about how fishes in the fish market are threaded,
here is a link to that video.

And I have this need to work more on projects that are about animals, so I hanged out in the Zagreb Zoo, and fell in love in this turtle from Australia, he or she I'm not sure yet, is living in this small aquarium, and can't even swim, and everyone is knocking on the glass trying to wake her up and make her do stuff.
But there was this little girl (she is not in this part of the video I uploaded, she will be in the end) that came and tried to pet her trough the glass and the turtle responded just like she actually felt that touch even if they were separated. So I though of making a story about a sad turtle that found a friend.
First, the kids are making fun of her because she is ugly (you can see one of those kids in the video), but she in spite of that just tries to give love.
And the song that goes in the background is about love.

Anyway, I don't want to give too much cues, I would love if anyone has an opinion,
JUST SHOOT!
Thank you so much! <3


This is just little part of the video, not really edited or anything, just raw material, trying to get a sense of what I should do.

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It looks great !

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Looks very nice too me!

@okkiedot
thank you! really! <3

You'll do something special. As far as it concerns me you are an artist. Lots of ideas and you bring them to life. I am happy to see your work.

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Nothing cheesy about this. I feel it's a beautiful story and you picked a perfect subject. I have the idea that this is a so called 'Alligator snapping turtle'. When I saw the picture above the post, I thought I was looking at an alligator. They are amazing and dangerous animals. They can actually kill alligators. This one seems kind of harmless, very old and possibly depressed due to lack of space and natural environment. I feel sorry for the beast.

This music is beautiful, even though I don't understand a word of it.

I don't have any further feedback right now but feel welcome to brainstorm with me on Discord ;>)

Have a lovely day,

Vincent

P.S. Is your first name actually Marina? If so, I understand your love for water (animals)

@vincentnijman
Thank you! I was there again today and actually I read about the turtle on the internet, it's really NOT HARMLESS even if she looks like it, you're absolutely right!
And today, I was there for like 3 hours and she moved for 15s. But it's not boring to sit and wait for something to happen. I will write you more about it on discord today or tomorrow, I have a chaotic day right now :)
And, yes my first name is Marina, I never thought about this, now I feel like it has meaning, thank you <3

It feel very ZEN to me, must be almost like meditation.
I wish I could be there too. I'm sure I would enjoy it, both as a filmmaker/ storyteller and as an observer.

Funny to hear that I've given meaning to you name. It's a pretty name.

P.P.S. Can't help but thinking of Guillermo Del Toro's The Shape of Water, which I still need to see :>)

I don't really know what changes you could do as I love the way it looks! Good work! :)