Tomatoes and Provident Living

in weekendfreewrite •  6 years ago 

"Where are they coming from?" She Screamed. The window was black, covered with buzzing flies. She’d seen plenty of flies in her day, including big ones like this that she and her brother’s called meat flies growing up, large and much slower than their smaller cousins, but knew she’d never seen anything like this before!

Cathy had been canning stewed tomatoes and cranking the metal handle of the juicer all morning and now into the afternoon too as the block-long rows of tomatoes were all coming on at once. She’d saved two ten gallon buckets and a pile of Anaheim’s and jalapeno’s for a run of salsa tomorrow, but now her wrists hurt, fingers were water-logged and she felt her gumption to get so much done was waning.

Plus, she knew tomorrow she’d add to her pains having to wear the pair of swimming goggles she’d also set out in order to prevent her eyes burning out, and knew too at her age the suctioning action could put raccoon rings around her eyeballs for the following three days!

“Don’t open that door,” she shouted at her adult son as he approached his hand already on the knob. She saw him simultaneously pull his head back from the buzzing frenzy of flies that were now a disturbed cloud as his own eyes registered.

“What the hell are these,” he shouted before cursing some more.

Her five year old grandson dragging a bouncing yo-yo behind him on the sidewalk stopped watching his toy and skipped up the steps to find out what all the fuss was about.

“Whoa! What are all those flies trying to bug you for, Grandma”?

“Really, I don’t know unless they’re some new killer strain of ketchup flies who ran out of stuff to eat at the Del Monte factory!” she teased.

“Can I have them?” he begged.

She instructed son and his son to meet her at the back door, where the trailing yellow roses and the ancient black walnut were casting shadows across the flimsy, wooden, screened door they rarely used that opened to her dining room. There, she pulled her son and then grandson in quickly, only letting seven or so flies buzz in before securing the hook and eye latch.

Son and mother laughed about the Mormon crickets and stories in Revelations about bottomless pits, scorpions and locusts. Could be these hot temperatures were bringing about the last days sooner than hoped. At least she’d have preserved some food for her loved ones if times got bad.

Her grandson stared at the flies in the front window and tugged at her shirt,
“Please, grandma, I want them! I can feed them to Harold!” Harold was Ethan’s leopard gecko.

She gave him one of the washed and drying canning jars, one of the few wide mouths she mostly used for peaches with a lid and ring and these instructions:

"You need to count them. All of them!! Best to hide them behind the house and you can take them home from there.”

Ethan spent the rest of the afternoon scooping and pinching and guiding with a small goldfish net as many flies as he could into his jar—some getting away as he opened and slapped the lid, turned the gold ring, but for the most part he was catching a pretty good amount for his mere five years. She swelled a bit with pride thinking her grandson had much more tenacity and focus than most of the other little kids in her Sunday school class who seemed unable to focus more than a minute.

After coming in briefly for lunch, he’d taken a gob of Alpo wet from Wanda’s bowl in the kitchen and added it to the jar saying it’d keep the flies occupied on the bottom and not flying away.

That afternoon he left with an almost black bottle of flies for his Harold. She really hoped his mother wouldn’t be too mad.

Next morning she woke to crystals on the lawn, fairy dust of late fall, both magical and disturbing. How could this be? She was sure glad she’d picked most of the tomatoes and this would be the first time in history that she’d canned salsa in a sweater. She saw many of the flies had gone and those remaining were very slow, like the wasps that wake from frozen logs brought in from the stack and set by the fire in February.

She found she was running short on lids and needed to jet down to the IGA and hopefully they still had some in stock so she didn’t have to drive all the way into Spanish Fork, especially after canning two days and in her sweats and ratty sweater. She was wearing clogs she kept by the door with no socks and couldn’t believe when she got in her Honda that frost covered the windshield! She dug around a stack of maps and Kotex in her glove box and finally found her free, gas station scraper.

Second Timothy, “This know also, that in the last days perilous times shall come,” she repeated to herself, in small puffs of breath as the abraded white added a burn to her already reddened and dried hands.

Her testimony of provident living growing in her bosom as she slowly took the icy curves.

An @mariannewest, weekend, three prompts freewrite:
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Beautifully written, I enjoyed reading this story. The words just flow nicely together.
                           
Congratulations for your curie vote :).

Thank you :)

wonderful tales and descriptions. You do an amazing job of weaving all the prompts effortlessly into this tale.

Thank you, @wandrnrose7! It's been awhile since I'd tried one and was super surprised to get a curie vote! For whatever reason fiction seems more difficult to write--or forced in some way, but maybe I'm not that bad a fiction writer? HUGS

you're a great writer, poems and fiction! I'm glad you received recognition! hugs!

I wonder what those flies were looking for. They seem to be really significant in the story but i still can't get it. Were they fairies? I ask because of the reference to the fairy dust she found in the morning.

Aside from that, i found your story interesting . I like the enthusiasm of her young grandson. Congrats on your curie upvote too.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting.
Flies were the prompt given by a group I write with, so went with it. Fairy dust was the way in which I see snow.

Congrats on the curie vote!!!

I love how you pulled this story together!

Yay! So exciting to get a curie vote!
Thank you! Fun to get creative around any prompt that comes out way. Thanks for all of the work you do in the freewrite wheelhouse!

Such a hardworking granny! I love your story, you captivate your reader with your well crafted words. I like the touch of the grandson harvesting those flies for his gecko.
Lovely writing, and congrats on your curie vote!

Thank you so much :)

Thanks for sharing @kimberlylane! It reminds me of my mother and father growing tomatoes in the back yard. All summer long my mom tends to them and uses them in salads for dinner. When winter comes and the green ones haven't ripened, my father pickles them with different spices and we eat them in the evenings as summer fades away. And they're so good!

We fight off the mosquitoes more than the flies though hahaha thanks again for sharing!

Love that my writing takes you into memories of your parents :)
The green tomato pickles sounds super good--bottled sunshine!

Absolutely! Nothing better than that.

Interesting indeed, one of those reads that I can't help but fluidly go through. Taught me some stuff about the craft.

Wow, very complimentary. Thank you.

“This know also, that in the last days perilous times shall come,”

That final sentence is true. It can be interpreted in different ways but for me it has a precise meaning. Anyway, your story is very well constructed and structured, you have done a great job. Upvote!

Thank you so much for reading and your kind words.

Really nice fiction. I could imagine every scene so easily. You are really good with words.

Thank you! I don't usually write fiction so nice to hear people enjoy reading it :)

This is a very nice story and it almost feels real. I like how she pleased her grandson and he could collect them for his leopard gecko. I really don't want to know what his mom thinks about it :)

I've also noticed a lesson that you gave in your story - better be prepared :) She did it and she didn't have to worry about the frost.

Pleasant, relaxing reading :) Thank you for sharing!

Thank you so much for your generous comment and time spent reading!

Here I am to support you my @kimberlylane Uncle Bruni likes your weekend #freewrite alot. 👍👍

I loved reading your story, Kim! Hopefully, the last days wouldn't come anytime soon for Cathy!😀

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Congratulations on the Curie vote :)
Flies... tones of them... when my brother and sister were very young, we had gone to this place to eat, and it swarmed with those light insects
We had just watched a movie about flies attacking some times
They were screaming and shouting and crying... it was quite a show
Eventually, my parents just scooped them, got us all into the car and sped off
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Thanks! Hate, that sounds like a difficult prompt!

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Oha, now I'm flying out of my funny mood. At the same time I want to be there, in the house and garden and sniff the smell of preserving tomatoes and watch Grandma at work, feel good, put on a pot of hot water and pass it to her.

What a busy doing and making, what a beautiful, sweaty way to spend your time sensibly. Nevertheless, a breath of something different blows in the air, the flies are a mystery. A small shiver runs through the idyll and I feel the physical hardships of Cathy completely. To nourish others with her bosom is also a life's work. It is already a long life, one that she knows and which her last words promise ... I don't know. Nothing I would like to name. Get's chilly there. ...

I congratulate you from the bottom of my heart for the curie vote. The days I still thought, with what consistency, perseverance and loyalty to yourself you do your writing craft. I may forget a lot and this place may cease to exist sometime, but surely I will keep you in my heart for this connection across all borders. How beautiful when I can speak to the one I read.