Word Poetry Challenge #6: Time

in wordchallenge •  6 years ago 

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I will woke up crying
Still hurt and begging
For your presence
That will bring back my senses

One day i will wake up
Trying to forget the setup
No more tears to drop
And days to stop

One day i will wake up smiling
With a beautiful goodmorning
I will be more than something
And you will be nothing

Soon, i hope i can still wake up
Because im ready to stop
Everything keeps going back
Like the pin on a clock

As time passes by
One day ill find the right guy
That will satisfy
And will not make me cry

At the right moment
At the right space
At the right time
With the right guy

That's what the girls wanted to.
WHAT I OBSERVED IS WHAT I WRITE THE POEM.

BEST REGARDS @diiicks

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      ·  6 years ago 

    This lineation's tone is mellowed and the mood is somber having resigned to good fortune and hope. Nice one here...👌

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        ·  6 years ago 

      Thank you for appreciating it my friend @jodekss

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          ·  6 years ago 

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            ·  6 years ago 

          I like the story behind the poem, also I agree with what you said how the right guy will arrive at the right time. Great work!

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              ·  6 years ago 

            Thank you for appreciating my poem sir

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                ·  6 years ago 

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