Word Poetry Challenge #16 "Patience" By @four20

in wordchallenge •  6 years ago 

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Impatience

Patience is something
I’ve never done well
Always bouncing off walls
Living with me
Must be bloody hell

I drive too fast
Always running late
I can’t be last
It’s not my fate

Patience is a virtue
So they say
For me it’s just part
Of some game they play

I can’t sit still
I don't know how
If you don't understand
I can't explain it now

Being impatient
is how I am
I'll never be a saint
Catch me if you can

ljk

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Friend, @four20!
You have managed to capture the concept of PATIENCE in a great way!
The emotion of the author is perceived, because the patience/impatience relationship is materialized throughout in context!
Your poem was very good, I enjoyed reading, congratulations!
Keep it up, my friend! Creating the best images and doing the best job ...

Luck!

Thank you so much