Words will never be enough to write about sunsets.
But you did a great job describing its beauty.
The third stanza is the one I like the most.
It is in the focus zone. It is in the middle.
It also has four verses. Two of them being questions and the other ones statements.
It gives the feeling of balance.
Just like when witnessing a sunset.
We are in the middle of the day and the night.
Balance.
RE: Word Poetry Challenge #8 : Sunsets
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Ohhh. This is simultaneously insightful and flattering. Thank you, you write well as well. 😊
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