RE: Pendekar Pewaris Prahara #1. Bara Cakar Api: Suatu Malam di Pesisir Nanggroe

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Pendekar Pewaris Prahara #1. Bara Cakar Api: Suatu Malam di Pesisir Nanggroe

in writing •  7 years ago 

Seruuu namun akan lebih seru lagi jika setiap adegan dituliskan bunyinya bang. Misalnya hiaaaat.. buk buk buk.. dua diantara pasukan itu jatuh tersungkur ke pasir..

Atau duaaaarrrr... Ledakannya menggelegar..

Hihihi

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