Poetry "Unemployment"

in writing •  7 years ago  (edited)

Unemployed is torture
Life is hollow
No movement benefit
There are no results

Find a job make money
Heart is not good
Find a halal stagger
It's really hard to piss off
💌💌💌
Unemployment is upsetting
Life is lonely
Endless loneliness
I want a job that produces
💌💌💌
Someday I will succeed
Master my inner doubt
The firm embrace of my soul
I broke my spirit
And I got the success of life

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Nice poem dude. But if you're looking to make money.... steemit is not the place... sorry to burst your bubble... don't believe in the hype around this platform. most of the dudes in here are probably the developers and their dweeb friends, circle jerking each other through paid upvotes and getting newbs like us to pay for upvotes. real talk.

  ·  7 years ago 

But I've proven it and I've got a satisfactory result. in the form of money I've got in steemit, rather than stealing and this platform is real. because I already know, we are here to play do not have to use capital at all. do you understand what I mean ???

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

I appreciate the enthusiasm, and I too agree that the intention for this platform is that we can all share content with each other and not depend on a central figure for rewards.... But you really got to ask yourself... is this really so... or has this "decentralized" platform been taken over by whale accounts that control this shit? Im not critizing your posts... I just want everyone to really consider that this platform is not realy what it seems... Maybe I'm wrong, but maybe im not.. but this is an inquiry I would like to discuss with fellow steemians. What are your thoughts?

  ·  7 years ago 

this is just a motivational poem for unemployment, so do not despair of searching