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Post 7
Click entered the Deepsee to find Joshua slumped on the floor, ashen faced, with tears in his eyes. It was obvious that the boy had been viewing something he shouldn’t.
Click – “Did I not explain why it was better not to chase mysteries?”
Joshua – “I’ve seen it. The wound in space, surrounded by Void Seeds.”
Click was mildly irritated that Joshua had ignored the warning.
Click – “You lack discipline Joshua. However, you are not alone in that.”
Something in Click’s voice made Joshua look up. He was getting to know Click quite well. It was difficult not to when he was spending so much time in his head. There was resignation and guilt in his tone.
Click – “What did you see?”
Joshua – “Thousands and thousands of giant Void Seeds arranged in slowly rotating concentric rings around a terrible wound in space. A nearby planet was being pulverized and sucked into the wound whilst something was leaking through from the other side. The Void Seed seemed to be harvesting energy leaking from the tear.”
Of course, Click could simply have scanned through Joshua’s memories but that would prevent him from learning about Joshua’s perspective, how the experience had affected him and how he chose to articulate it was sometimes important.
Joshua could plainly see that Click was becoming more and more subdued as he recounted the viewing.
Click – “In a way, I’m glad you’ve seen it…..the gate. I wish only that I might have prepared you better before-hand. It is the Daxiste-agori’s great shame.”
Joshua – “What? You made it?”
Click – “Not the terrible, festering rent that it has become, but it’s precursor, yes. I will try to explain. The Daxiste-agori are ancient, the oldest and most technologically advanced race in the universe. For some of us, the universe began to gradually shrink, to become like a prison. Our towering egos clouded our judgement.
We had long mastered worm-holes for instantaneous travel and the temptation to adapt that technology to enable exploration beyond the boundaries of our space-time became harder and harder to resist. Eventually, we began opening gateways to places beyond this universe. In our haste to satisfy our obsession, we overlooked the simple fact that beyond the boundaries of our universe are infinite realms and beings that should never interact.
There had been several unsettling occurrences and we were about to halt all experimentation with gateways when the last, the gateway to the Void Seed realm was opened. You see, the gateways were all very small…..enough to send through a probe to ascertain something of the nature of the place on the other side. But the very instant this last one came into being, a massive burst of energy was unleashed. It completely incinerated a Daxiste-agorian research vessel and turned our small gateway into the monstrous tear you saw earlier. All communications were disrupted and we believe the first Void Seeds came through from the other side, shortly afterwards.”
As Joshua listened to Click describe what he knew of the history of the wound and the Void Seed, he began to get angry. Very angry. His fists started to clench and unclench rhythmically.
Click was lost in his memories and failed to notice the change that Joshua was undergoing.
Click – “Every attempt we’ve made to reach and close the gateway has been met with overwhelming force from the Void Seed. They are able to feed off almost all forms of energy, rendering the majority of our weapons redundant. The only substance that permanently harms them is Argantuan white bone, which is in short supply. If only we…..”
A spike of pain wrenches Click from his memories. His mind is cast out from Joshua’s. He looks at Joshua and is shocked for the first time in over a thousand years. The boy’s eyes have begun emanating red light and his body has grown. Some kind of black material has begun to spread over parts of his contorted body. Joshua suddenly arches back and roars. With a thought, Click sends a distress call. Hopefully, they wouldn’t be long in answering, because this could get very bad indeed.....
24 Years ago
Jayden Carter rubbed his eyes as he stared at the monitor. Anna had finally made contact.
Jayden – “Ok so you want me to request authorisation for a thousand volunteers to join the alien fleet. They will be genetically enhanced, given training and contextual knowledge so that they can come back to Earth and train more of us. At that time, the Alliance will build a permanent base on the moon as a staging post for further integration and involvement in the war effort."
Anna – “That’s pretty much it.”
Jayden – “I’ll see what I can do.”
Anna – “Thank you.”
Jayden – “No Anna, thank you. It was very brave of you to go with the aliens. The fact that you were their choice for first contact speaks volumes. Hopefully, one day, we’ll be able to celebrate it properly.”
Anna – “Thank you.”
Jayden – “I’ll be in touch.”
A Ziff installed communications panel would make contacting Anna far simpler in future. An important step if more humans were to join the fleet.
The suspense is getting strong, can't wait for the next one!
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Nice plot
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what happened whit the boy?... what is the red light?
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Not sure, but I'd say the red light coming from Joshua's eyes are either a result of his augmentation or a reaction to his eating the Void Seed's heart. My guess is a combination of the two. Each acting and reacting on the other to transform Joshua beyond what was intended. But we shall see....
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A very reasonable assumption. The only reason I consider the changes to be a direct result of the void seed heart is because it's potency is far greater than anything else. What is absolutely true is the fact that his genetic enhancements have made it possible for him to survive the changes at all.
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His eyes are glowing red.
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im cofused. im reading again
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Joshua is having a reaction to his encounter with the Void Seed. Click has been keeping a close eye on him, thought did not expect what would happen. The physical changes Joshua is experiencing are a direct result of him eating the Void Seed heart.
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oh right, and perhaps he will have more effects
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It seems likely ;)
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The plot thickens, so to speak. Now we know what the Void Seed are and how they got here. And even how to kill them. The story thread from the past is getting very interesting. I'm curious to see what happens as it catches up to present day events.
Obvious questions at this point, where are the 1000 that volunteered to join the fleet? Was Joshua part of a group being trained or just a random kid at camp?
I'm enjoying this story very much. Telling my friends about it. Please keep the new chapters coming!
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This is the most challenging writing experience I've ever undertaken. Your enthusiasm and support (and everyone else's) makes all the difference.....and I'm enjoying it immensely. Thank you so much.
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In the present, the 1000 are with the Alliance....but i haven't decided what they've been up to yet. Joshua will meet them soon. My notes are running at 2 posts ahead at the moment.
Joshua is receiving special tuition from Click due to his unusual actions in the glade.
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I'm your new reader. Great story :D
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Thrilled to have you following the story! Thanks
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just amazing story...................
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ah! next update come very soon. thanks :D
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nice story !
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New reader and follower... :)
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Amazing science fiction story. Thank you
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Why Joshua ate heart of the Void Seed? I've re-read part II, it's quite unusual for human boy to do this.
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I think it's was a result of several factors; his tendency towards outrage at injustice, the injection was in the process of causing physical and psychological changes within him, it was an instinctive reaction at having defeated his enemy and finally, perhaps he was attempting to take on the strength of his enemy. Definitely unusual though ;))
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Thank you for the great story. Love it.
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Plot is superb!
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It seems us humans have a lot more to from Click then just technology -- how to actually listen to someone and gain their perspective, is just as important as the facts. This is getting very interesting @benjojo :))
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best science-fiction
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These posts just wouldn't feel the same anymore without at least a couple of these awesome space and sci-fi images! Thanks!
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Amazing story @benjojo
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hm, good story @benjojo you shold keep writing such stuff
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This drawings were inspired in the scene of the first part, the beings that appear in the firecamp. Hope you like it (check the needle)
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Wow, just wow. They are beautiful. I absolutely love your interpretation of the feather knives down their back and arms.
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Thank you, im glad you liked it, i enjoyed making it and i wouldn't mind creating more, just let me know if you are interested, keep doing what you do, it have a lot of images that are great for drawings or filming
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I'm more interested than you can possibly imagine ;) I absolutely cherish any artistic effort to engage with the story and characters. Especially when rendered so beautifully.
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I really liked it, will you write another @benjojo
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I intend to keep going until I've made a middle and end....so yes, there will definately be another post :))
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wow!
I enjoy it. thanks :D
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Love it. So many interesting things out there are unknown
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just a pleasure to read @benjojo
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Great story. I'm glad you were recommended to me. I'll be passing this on to others. Hopefully this will convince them to get on Steemit also.
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I really hope so. Thank you so much.
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Every part is brilliant
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The writing is far from perfect but I will continue to make every effort to improve it. Thank you so much.
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thank you for regular updates......
A photo for your story
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I love the sci-fi pics that get posted! It wouldn't be the same without them any more :)
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Nice one part! Thank you!
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I'm interesting, have you already thought what the end of this story will be?
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The truth is I have no idea. I've been so consumed with building out the immediate story that I haven't yet had a chance to think about where it will lead. I can promise you one thing. If I can keep going for long enough, I will use every creative bone in my body to ensure it is satisfying!
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Ok, im trust you)
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That's nice. I like fantastic.
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OHHH, i had so much faith in Joshua, poor boy is becoming a human void seed..
Have to admit that im staring to get lost in the stories from the past
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If there's anything you'd like me to clarify, just ask. I'm more than happy to try and explain where we're at!
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The points are hard to connect at times, sometimes 30, 25, 24 years.. Not sure if its difficult or im not paying enough attention, i'll compile it in word and read it again calmly
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No i'm sure it's not just you. This is a difficult format to follow a story like this. The times from the past are almost unimportant. All that is happening is that Anna's past is gradually catching up to the present. The exception is the 1 year ago flashback when we learn of the death of Joshua's parents.
I think after every 10 posts, i'll do a "Story so far" summary post. Hopefully that will help as we go, assuming I get anywhere near 20 posts....I hope so.
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This is so cool... I love this kind of reading, don't keep us waiting too long for the next part! :D
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I only say it's an amazing science fiction. bravo man :)
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