RE: Muse (Original Short Fiction)

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Muse (Original Short Fiction)

in writing •  7 years ago 

This is amazing! I got a lot of Dirk Gently's vibes from it, probably just because of the old university and a time machine. I quite love the way you spun the timelines about like cotton candy. I love a good time travel piece. The last paragraph seemed a little forced, but overall your prose is at a great level.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Thank you for the response. Sorry for the delay, I've been off Steemit for a while. Just getting back into the swing of things.

    I agree completely about the last paragraph being forced. I felt like I needed to wrap everything up with a tidy philosophical bow, and it ended up coming out of left field. I should have spent more time working on it, but I got lazy at the end. Honestly, thanks for calling me out on it, and for the rest of your comment. I really appreciate it.

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