Hello guys so I want to become a better writer as you know I’m a terrible writer my grammar, structuring all the techniques are non existent but after some kind words an advice from the legend herself the one and only @dreemsteem so let’s get into the story that she helped me write.

It was late in the afternoon, just before the light of day started to change. I had been sitting on the couch looking for something to do, and found myself reading silly stories on the internet.

Somehow, I began clicking on stories that were suspenseful. It was fun, but I lost track of time. By the time, I looked up, the sun had set and I could barely see the trees outside.

I started to feel uncomfortable, like someone was watching me. Chills started to creep up my back as I began tentatively looking into the shadows beyond my window.

Just then....

SO THAT WAS ALL HER SHE STARTED IT OFF FOR ME

So here’s my part...

Just then I hear banging at the front door before I even move I hear more banging this time from the back door. I scramble looking for a place to hide I jump down to the floor underneath the window the banging still continuing.

now I can here a scream as the seconds go by the louder it gets crawl to the telephone I quickly dial 911 as as the operator picks up I get a static noise then silence all the power in my house has gone out before I have time to turn around the door falls from its frame.

a tall man with eyes as red as fresh blood enters and just stares at me he doesn’t say a word just stares at me and slowly he starts to smile and the more I stare the bigger he smiles.

I run to the back door his smile drops he runs at me I opened the back door just in time but I was pushed back by another tall Man I fell and hit my head I felt extremely dizzy.

I was being carried by them both towards a van when I here a siren they drop me and run for it but I manage to grab one mans leg and delayed him for a few seconds that was enough for the cops to get him and take him down as I am side by the am officer to stand up the man said nothing didn’t even resist being arrested just stared at me like I was lifeless they took him away but his eyes felt like they never went after the officer drove away I felt huge relief I felt safe.

AND THATS MY PART OF THE STORY

Was is bad? Most definitely

Was it good? Nope

Why did I do it ? Because @dreemsteem said so and she gets what she wants

Will I do this again ? Absolutely she will make me 🤣

Thank you so much for reading I’d love to hear your guys feedback so do give some all feedback is welcome as long as it’s HONEST

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