陌生的繁華

in writing •  6 years ago  (edited)

在很遠很遠那裡
他愛上她 她也愛他
在很遠很遠那裡
他告別她 往城市闖蕩
陌生的繁華很繽紛
陌生的繁華很冷酷
而他向著繽紛的繁華追逐去
她獨自在遠方默默的祈禱

只要黃昏接近的時刻
她必定在那裡等著他
彩霞中也許下著雪
她永遠望向他離去的路

在很遠很遠那裡
他愛上她 她也愛他
在很遠很遠那裡
他告別她 往城市闖蕩
陌生的繁華很繽紛
陌生的繁華很冷酷
而他逃避不了冷酷的繁華
她猶在遠方翹首盼望

只要黃昏接近的時刻
她必定在那裡等著他
彩霞中也許下著雪
她永遠望向他離去的路

陌生的繁華很繽紛
陌生的繁華很冷酷
而他逃避不了冷酷的繁華
她猶在遠方翹首盼望

只要黃昏接近的時刻
她必定在那裡等著他
彩霞中也許下著雪
她永遠望向他離去的路
她永遠望向他離去的路

上面這一段文字，是我寫的。我想知道，讀者們看過，對這一段文字有什麼感覺，或解讀，或評價，或評論。腦中有什麼畫面？勾起你什麼感想？讓你想起什麼？請盡量說說吧！

為了鼓勵發言，對於認真有誠意的發言（不一定要長），酌予點讚感謝。

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      ·  6 years ago 

    可以講實話麼😂
    感覺有點啰嗦😳

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      ·  6 years ago 

    對嘛！有話直說，但話說你是先看到新帖才留這話的，還是沒有？

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        ·  6 years ago 

      先看了這個 才看到答案 ~

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          ·  6 years ago (edited)

        她永遠望向他離去的路，心裡想著:「肚子一天天的大了。」
        她永遠望向他離去的路，心裡想著:「我該嫁給不知情的阿牛嗎?」

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          ·  6 years ago (edited)

        哈哈哈~~~~ 這是八點檔劇情~~~~~

        (拍拍) 沒關係的，阿牛，事到如今，孩子是無辜的。

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          ·  6 years ago 

        阿牛:我會愛這孩子，跟愛你一樣深滴...

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            ·  6 years ago 

          他一定欠了她很多錢

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Aa的成長路看來很艱辛，充滿經濟壓力.... 只好把愛深深藏在心底....

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              ·  6 years ago 

            對呀，昨晚還在興高采烈準備看六合彩的結果，卻發現今晚才是...

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                ·  6 years ago 

              不然哪里来的素材写「重口味」小说勒🤔

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                  ·  6 years ago (edited)

                你覺得他會喜歡哪種女人？還是其實 ............

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                    ·  6 years ago 

                  哈哈哈哈哈，這個「其實…」我早先也同他考證過🤣🤣🤣

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                      ·  6 years ago 

                    什麼！？真的假的？他早已經...... 已經...... 揮刀..... 自 ..... Orz....

                    看說明書都一定要看到最後一頁

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                        ·  6 years ago 

                      對，已揮刀......割掉包皮🤣

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                          ·  6 years ago 

                        喂喂喂~~~~ 這麼有氣質的一篇，怎麼被 我們 你搞得這麼下流啦~~~

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                            ·  6 years ago 

                          very nice pic dear friend

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                              ·  6 years ago 

                            默念了兩遍，真的不考慮找人譜個曲？

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