RE: My Vacation On the Exotic Shores of a Black Hole - Part 9

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My Vacation On the Exotic Shores of a Black Hole - Part 9

in writing •  7 years ago 

I like the use of the word 'badass' so early on. Should be used more in literature! Good structure to your story too.

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