The day the aliens came.

in writing •  7 years ago  (edited)

alien-3004340__480.jpg

We don't speak the old language much no more.
No hey mate
No G'day

There was a time when they'd take your kids to be re-schooled
To learn the alien lingo
To learn how dumb we were

Not dumb anymore though
They've trained us up they have
Now I know those old humans were bad

Just stupid and lazy
Our parents and theirs
Worthless

Now we're part of New Earth
Owned and conquered.
All one

Won over
We're part of them now
And we celebrate

The day the starships came
Destroyed our culture
Way of Life

Everything

But we're good now, eh?
We celebrate
We ain't dumb no more.

✨ ✨ ✨

Photo courtesy of pixabay.com

drwom-01.png

DQmampd9mQbBZuWMnd1uSm37WSjquEWDcwKGZjz15dpivgQ.png

@drwom footer by the awesome @ryivhnn !!

Authors get paid when people like you upvote their post.
If you enjoyed what you read here, create your account today and start earning FREE STEEM!
Sort Order:  

Nice poem, it made me think that the native americans may have feel the same when they got conquered by the spanish or british.

You got it. This is about Australia Day - the anniversary of the day the British invaded Australia

Same happened in Italy, americans came and bombed Italy to "free" them from Mussolini, thousand died and everyone celebrates the day of the liberation.... maybe i will write a poem about that.

Aliens will surely come with their spaceship, and when they do come i will be waiting....for i know they are our alien and we are their alien

What if WE are the aliens

Pretty sure that we are haha

Hello , My name is Human - I come from the stars....

Did you know Neil Armstrong (the first man on the moon) backwards is Alien? (A lieN)


That's for a fact. Thanks for the inspiring poetry! I like my mind to drift and explore the steemit universe.

I love that
Thanks!

We were never dumb, no. We were learning over the span of multiple generations. Researching and planning our next existence. The reckoning of us. Our delivery.

same thing happened to the Aztecs...

Exactly
Colonised peoples everywhere

Nice.. that's the punky alien

God forbid, we cannot be alien,aliens have their own planet, not our earth

No treading lightly on your part eh drwom! You covered a lot of ground in just a few stanzas, did it well too. Best.

Nice Piece. Sometimes I really think humanity need that invasion though at the rate we are going killing all other species and decimating the planet. We are truly dumb to quote your writing. It is not like we have anywhere else to go one we have ruined everything here. I think we could use some up-training . We sure don't seem like we are getting it on our own ...

Nice! I like the theme of alien arrival and the irony of how the thinking has changed from the old days -- where the language was jovial and open -- to the New World days where the speaker learns to hate themself. Thanks for this, @drwom. I am looking forward to more!

Если мыслить разумно то уже не слух что мы не одни во всей вселенной, у нас по новостям показывали как в Китае был открыт саркофаг и когда его открыли был взрыв большой энергии и погибло много людей, там нашли артефакт, этот артефакт повезли Русские на станцию "Восток" коротая находиться на севере где был зарегистрирован абсолютный минимум -89..там говорят впервые официально было вроде встречи с НЛО, я считаю что артефакт был отдан за право жить лучше..это лично мое мнение

wow. Impressive

I dreamt of aliens last night.
Nice poem.

me impresiona como en tan corto texto se puede desprender muchas ideas sobre este tema; es mas, puede ser una metáfora de nuestra sociedad en cuanto la introducción de una cultura en otro lugares. excelente.

It's very lovely poetry. Thanks for sharing this.

nice :)

What does it mean to live authentically & truly pursue your passion - Artsy Fartsy inspirational motivational - by Jose Arteaga https://d.tube/v/josearteaga/kgfs19zi

It's an inspiration. Keep up the good work.

I read your poem well.
I am writing poetry in my daily life.
Come see me once I wrote it.@junsug

Very cool little story you have made there @drwom, I liked it very well,,,

Thanks for sharing .

Thanks for letting us know.

Lovely
It's a deep poem

Nice post @drwom i liked ur way of expression keep it up 👍🏼

I pray that they will abduct me.

I liked how you used, "eh". Are you Canadian?

No - Aussie 😁

  ·  7 years ago Reveal Comment