RE: Mistress of Magic: Morgan's First Apprentice - Chapter 4 - Food for Thought

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Mistress of Magic: Morgan's First Apprentice - Chapter 4 - Food for Thought

in writing •  7 years ago 

I almost missed this one! I really enjoy these and I can't wait to see where it goes.

I hope you don't mind, but I spotted a a few minor typos that I'll quote here:

I rose from the couch, just ase Morgan's magic swirled around me, tickling a little,

as

Glancing into a wall mirror I saw nowan intricate bu

now an

Actually, perhaps change the word order: Glancing into a wall mirror, I now saw an intricate...

I noticed the Knights’ armor had Morgan's initials carved onto the front of the chest-piece.

Carved into? I think it should be into..?

"No, I do not. .

Lots of dots.

Was this a recruitment speech?.

Extra punctuation, no period needed.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Whoops. Thank you for this. Also, new chapter coming tonight. I will try to have less typos in it.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      "ase" and "nowan" are still there.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        :cries:

        Are you on @isleofwrite ? They get early access to the chapters and help me edit and proof them. You are more than welcome to help!!!!!

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            ·  7 years ago 

          I'm following the account, but there seems to be more to it than that; I'll have to poke around a bit. Thanks for reminding me. :)

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Come to the discord.

            Also, I noticed you upvoted old posts of mine. Don't. It's a waste of voting power at those posts were already paid out. Never vote on anything older than a week - it does nothing.

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