RE: The Third Adventure with Peter Pan

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The Third Adventure with Peter Pan

in writing •  7 years ago 

You have a minor typo in the following sentence:

Her stomach was left somewhere on the ground in on of the ups and downs of the swing.
It should be one of the instead of on of the.

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