You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:

Asked her what took her soo long to come home and most importantly bring me home,she started mumbling and playing with her words,sensing she was lying,father delt her a slap on the cheek which sent her halfway to the underworld,the earth became void and empty,i could tell,see my dad was a lefty,u so do not want him to slap u,I was so scared i thought she may have died or something,thankfully she regained conciousness after a few rounds of being sprinkled holy water,lol.

It should be consciousness instead of conciousness.