RE: The Wall who could speak and the secrets she knew (short story)

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The Wall who could speak and the secrets she knew (short story)

in writing •  7 years ago 

Nice piece, interesting throughout the story.
I would advice to keep an eye on where to put commas, though, but that's my only feedback.
Keep writing!

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Thank you for reading, and for your advice. I will keep my eye out for the commas. Have a great day!!

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