The expression of my heart when it sees the beauty of the creation

in writing •  7 years ago  (edited)

Woke up this morning seeing everywhere bright and clear. The birds whistles sounds that are so melodious to my ears, i felt i am in the sky floating, breaking the law of gravity. But wait!!! what is wrong with me? i really have no idea. My heart is sinking.

From the time the sun rise,
the cock crows,
and the birds sings melodiously,
flying so high in the sky.
Its so bright and clear,
I woke up feeling so happy,
but had no idea why.
climbed to the top of a mountain,
wondering around.
From a distance,
I found one covered with beauty,
each step i took closer,
the more beautiful it becomes.
what a beauty,
Like that of a shinny star
and that of a rainbow.
what is wrong with me ?
could this be love ?
i guess not
why all this feelings?
closed my eyes to meditate,
My heart beat rate increased.
still confused why.

Its difficult to sometimes think straight, when an anonymouse feeling crosses your mind and try to mess up the your brain. Looked at this nice quot that goes this way.

Everything has beauty, but not everyone sees it. [cofusius]
Never lose an opportunity of seeing anything beautiful, for beauty is God's handwriting.[Ralph Waldo Emerson]

In my poem, I made mention of one, who happens to be a very pretty lady so beautiful that even her beauty affects her shadow. This made me want to think that God perfected his writing when he was writing her beauty.


@aymen.mazhar could this be you? oh yes!!! i think it is

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This is the first time a kind stranger has written something so beautiful and dedicated it to me. I'm so overwhelmed, you're too kind and generous with your compliments. <3

It's said that beauty is in the eye of the beholder, so it is you who's chosen to find and spot beauty in another being, and captured it so beautifully in your words. I am humbled.

i have no idea what to say here now :P

You've said so much already :)

Its hope ..new life to pursue..new challenges to face

We hope to become happy at the very end
Thanks for your nice comment

Be here together..

Yes awesome and of course if my darling @aymen.mazhar is in it-it's gonna be incredible! Pretty lady! Great job knowledges 💜💜

with smiles and love

So much love to you @kristyyd

So much love to you gawwwgeous 💋

Wow,,,, indeed. Kristy is such a kind friend of yours
Niceeee

This Is So Beautiful and it got freshness inside it! Appreciating It. You Got A New Follower Today! :) I'm Hoping For More. Good Luck!

with smiles ,,, i appreciate your kind comment

So beautiful lines!

Hmmm, It is not easy. It's like you have to create something out of nothing. Nice

with smiles ,,,, thank you for the nice comment, appreciate it :)

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