RE: Inspiration for Life

You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

Inspiration for Life

in writing •  7 years ago 

In the 2nd line in the 1st verse I would of put:

The moon and the stars both keep glowing

So it goes with the word flowing at the end of the 1st line.

Then with the chorus verse I would put:

You`ll have to keep growing

But who I am to judge.

Thanks for sharing too!

writing
7 years ago by

Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:

  • Disagreement on rewards
  • Fraud or plagiarism
  • Hate speech or trolling
  • Miscategorized content or spam

Submit
$0.00
    2
    Authors get paid when people like you upvote their post.
    If you enjoyed what you read here, create your account today and start earning FREE STEEM!
    Sort Order:  
  • Trending
    • [-]
      ·  7 years ago 

    Thankyou for suggestions.I’ll work on this next time.

    Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:

    • Disagreement on rewards
    • Fraud or plagiarism
    • Hate speech or trolling
    • Miscategorized content or spam

    Submit
    $0.00
      [-]
        ·  7 years ago 

      Your welcome and the more you write, the more you`ll feel it is right too. By writing more and more you will just become so much better as well within a space of 6 to 12 months. It will just glow and flow out of you like a beautiful floating butterfly.

      Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:

      • Disagreement on rewards
      • Fraud or plagiarism
      • Hate speech or trolling
      • Miscategorized content or spam

      Submit
      $0.00
        1 vote