RE: Infin(ite)ration: A short story—one chapter at a time. Chapter 4.

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Infin(ite)ration: A short story—one chapter at a time. Chapter 4.

in writing •  5 years ago 

Hi @iamscifi. I liked the final sentence; it's very good. However, history as such lacks more science fiction elements. It is as if he were reading a normal story but with certain technological words. Not bad but for me it lacks more atmosphere. Kind regards

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      ·  5 years ago 

    Thanks for your feedback. It's funny that you mention the lack of sci-fi depth, as I was thinking the same thing. Over the last few days, I added a decent amount of techxploration. Here a link the story in its entirety.

    https://steemit.com/writing/@iamscifi/fuck-this-one-chapter-at-a-time-shit-here-s-the-whole-short-story-infin-ite-ration

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        ·  5 years ago 

      You are very kind :) Thanks for the link

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