RE: WANTED - The Greatest John Lennon Solo Song - REWARD

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WANTED - The Greatest John Lennon Solo Song - REWARD

in writing •  7 years ago 

This is great! You used what you've learned well, yoko-oh no where's my reward? HA! Good use of imagery, artistically formatted, all elements are present. The only critiques I have are, the title, tell me more about the reward. Steemit offers us ridiculously long titles, use them. Your preview is what gets people in the door. Also, a bigger offer. If you could come up with something just a little bigger, I think you'd have more takers, but, about a third of your viewers are commenting, so not bad!

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