Fact or Fiction? - 10

in writing •  7 years ago  (edited)

The story I shared yesterday Here was...

100% true.

We completed the purchase and moved in just 6 days before I was 21 years old.

To buy the house, I had to sell my horse. That was a massive sacrifice on my part because she was my first and only horse.

I had always wanted a pony, always loved watching horses wherever I could find them.

My favourite toy was a rocking horse my grandad bought for me. I called him ‘Dapple’ (the rocking horse, not my grandad).

From then, I was besotted with horses and ponies. I didn’t have to even ride them, just being near to them soothed my soul and in the depths of a bad mood, going to sit with horses and ponies calmed me.

Selling Goldie was a necessity so that Trev and I could move onto the next chapter of our lives together. Though I loathed having to sell her, I don’t regret it. She went to a great home and because she was exceptionally clever, she made the transition from Showjumper to Dressage. She went on to become a Grade A Dressage horse.

Now for the story... Truth or Fiction?


We went to Vermont in America for a skiing holiday and in the middle of the skiing, I took Dani horse riding. We (the friends we were on holiday with) went to a farm that advertised horse riding. Because we made up a large group, the owner asked if any of us were experienced riders.

I said I was… kinda and she said in that case, she’d allow me to ride her personal horse. He’d not been ridden for a few months and was getting fat and lazy in the barn. The exercise would do him good. He wasn’t a nasty-tempered horse, but he was big and strong and he may not like the idea of leaving the nice warm barn and doing some work.

“I’ll be fine,” I said…

The kids were put on the most placid ponies and I had to be given a leg-up to get on this HUGE horse. He had to be at least 17HH (almost 1.75m) to the withers (highest point of the horse’s back). That means the horse’s head would be way taller than me. Perched on top of his back, I could see for miles…

Because my mount decided, we ended up last in the line.

“Keep him going forward, following us, because he’s really lazy and he’ll try to go back to the barn!” the owner shouted to me.

“OK!” I said, sounding way more confident than I felt that I had the ability to do as she told me.

The ponies followed a track off to the left, which then curved around to the right.

My horse decided he knew where they were going and he knew a short-cut. We set off across a pristine, un-walked-on field. The snow was almost up to the soles of my boots. The horse ploughed his way forward, heading straight for his owner.

I tried to get him back on-track but he was having none of it. I figured we were falling behind, so I’d allow him to catch up in his own way.

“Turn him away from there!” The owner shouted. It’s not a short-cut, that’s a cliff!”

As she said that, I looked to where the horse was heading and I could just see the rocks of the cliff. The snow was not deep enough to cover them, but as I’d already seen, the snow was pretty deep, the fall from that cliff would have been catastrophic!

‘I have a homicidal mount that’s trying to kill me, just so he can go back to bed!’ I thought to myself.

With panic-driven strength, I took him in-hand and turned him away. We had to go back to the beginning of the track to get around the fence. He thought he’d won and was going home until I swung him right to follow the others. He didn’t like that at all, but thankfully, he realised who was boss and did as I told him.

“You try to kill me and I’m going to make you wish you hadn’t,” I whispered to him. His ears flicked back… maybe he understood me… and then maybe he also believed me.

The trek through the maple forest was spectacular and well-worth the effort to get there.

Massive and majestic trees, a great guided tour and the possibly an opportunity to see moose!

The farm owned a syrup factory. That’s the reason for the maple forest. The sweet, sugary sap is harvested and produced on their own premises.

We spent a wonderful, magical time trekking through the forest, everything silent and somehow muted by the snow. The soft ‘crump’ sound of the horses’ hooves and creaking of leather the only sounds. The soft whinnies as the horses spotted another horse from a neighbouring farm.

That horse ride was one of the highlights of that trip – including the time Trev and I walked across a frozen lake! (Not as great as it sounds).

Various aspects from that trip to Vermont has made their way into a few of my stories, but the horse riding adventure has not, until now.

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This story and its exact description made me come back with my mind and remember that I really exist.
I think it's true because feelings popping up in your words show me.
Really great

I think this is the truth. When I was a kid I had a horse who was just as obstinant and preferred the barn over riding in the snow.

Lovely story! But it sounds like fiction to me somehow... ;)

This is a true story of your trip with Dapple. You are looking very cool in horse riding picture. I really enjoy this story of your riding trip.
Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful memories with us.

I'm going to pick True again.

I'm saying false because it seems too true.

wow! interesting competition ...
I read the story, it's very convincing so I think that the story will be - an invention :)
I'll find out tomorrow whether I'm right or not. But looking at the previous issues, I see that everything is not as it seems at first glance.

Truth. Why would it not be truth?

This one is fiction I believe!! Else your life is super interesting 😛😃

This story is very believable since I grew up around stables and know how stubborn horses can be, also grew up in the maple belt of Canada. It sounds very familiar, horses would have been a much needed asset for harvest time. I will put your story as truth.

100% fiction , if it wasn't she could be posting her real pictures , not Google free to use..

It's 100% fiction story.

   Resteemed!

Okay: I'm zero for two now, but I just can't stay away:

This story is true.

I read this story with pleasure, and with a full feeling of excitement I think that this story is true :)

Amaizing pic of you, Trev, and Goldie.

This story sounds exciting and true to me.

Cheers! : )

Can't believe I actually got another one right! lol. I'm going to really stretch my luck here and say this one is also true .....

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

That's absolutely fantastic adventure. It's awesome to visualize such an amazing ride on really a pristine place. Even if it's fiction, I'm not going to believe that its not true.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful memoir of you with us. It almost took me to that heavenly place.

Hey @michelle.gent
I agreed with and its very nice story you steeming. #Dapple is very beautiful and cute. Ita your old partner in happy life.
I like it you wonderful stuff. 100% fiction and all the best

This is a true story when you were young, right?
Thank you @michelle.gent for sharing your childhood adventures with us. :)

very interesting story, written so I think that she is the truth

I know this feeling when you have to sell something you care about so much. It happens such is life. Lovely story by the way.

Yes. I've ever felt it too... It's difficult to sell our lovely things.

Its good story. Last day story I already have commented. But today story was really interesting and also you have nice writing skill. In this story the pictures are so nice and beautiful. The pictures of horses in snow and deciduous forests looking so nice and heart touching scenes. Its a fiction not the fact. Thanks for sharing the post.

Give me vote!please!

wow! so beautiful story with nice content.

I love ur work man,it's a real passion and courage to post ur work,keep the good work congrats

Very good post

Interesting dear , good story .

good job.
keep it up...
@michelle.gent

Wow! Sound interesting and its mind blowing..
But it a fiction.im a fiction writer as well..check me up and my posts @spencer599

Wonderful shot it is a very beautiful picture

i really like your post and i enjoy it very with all post 👍

I can't ride horse. I wanna learn it, beside learning archery and swimming.

i enjoy your post! thanks

Man I wish houses could be more affordable. It takes alot of personal sacrafice to squire one as you clearly already know.

This was a long time ago. It's even more difficult now.