Fact or Fiction? - 8

in writing •  7 years ago 

What did you think of yesterday's story? Here

Yes, unfortunately, that was all TRUE I'm afraid. Even down to the encounter, years later. It was a dark time in my childhood and I'm thankful that I met and married someone else.

So, for today's adventure, I'm going further back into my past.

What do you think? Truth or Fiction?


In the summer holidays, the kids on our street would either split off into boys and girls or we’d go out en-masse on an adventure.

One particular hot summer’s day, in the depths of what passes for a heatwave in England (three fine days in a row) we went off to find some water to play in.

Being teens and pre-teens, we were, of course, immortal and so the dangers of playing in or near water did not apply to us – or at least we never thought they applied to us.

A dozen or so kids, all with adventure in their little black hearts, off to find a body of water for the day.

What could possibly go wrong?

Down Sherwood Street, past the ‘humps and hollows’, across the railway lines, (looking both ways and listening all the time, of course – we were immortal not stupid) we went up the slight rise and over the top to the lakes.

Well, large ponds really, but as most of us had never had any experience of real lakes they would do.

We had to be careful because the neighbouring village kids used to play there too and if we met with them, there could be violence – not always but it depended on whether we were evenly-matched in number.

On our way to the ponds, we’d found a large piece of polystyrene and someone had the bright idea of lugging it all the way to the ponds. It wasn’t a heavy piece, but it was really cumbersome and awkward, especially over stiles and through gaps in fences. Plus if there was a gust of wind, we’d be sure to get blown off our feet, so it was determined that at least two of us had to heft it at all times.

To the Lakes!

Past the old, abandoned and mostly fallen-down building that was too small to be a house, down the track, to our destination for the day!

There were three large rocks standing in the water. The first was easily accessible for everyone, even the little kids. The second was a leap from the first, too much for the little kids and the third was a swim for it.

Our mission that day – and we chose to accept it – was to achieve the third rock. Hence the polystyrene ‘raft’.

We played about in the shallows for a little while, seeing if there were any fish – there were never any fish. Sometimes there were tadpoles, but only if we brought our own – yep… we took tadpoles and ‘transplanted’ them in the lake.

Then we decided to launch the raft!

It took a few of us to lug the raft onto the second rock and we decided the raft would only support two of us.

So three of us decided, No guts, no glory! and first one got on board the raft. It was a little more difficult for the second one, balancing the weight between the front and the back. When the third one (me) got on, it had become a death-defying circus act.

Everyone was cheering us on and we didn’t like to disappoint.

The problem was, we didn’t have much in the way of paddles and leaning over to scoop water and propel ourselves along was… awkward, wet and worrying.

We were certain we’d all be tipped into the water at any moment and when we had drifted almost to the middle of the pond, one of our number piped up – “I can’t actually swim…”

I’m not sure if it was the vital information delivered in a not-so-timely fashion or the realisation that the raft really couldn’t cope with the weight and balance-distribution of three gawky kids, but we realised we may be taking on water.

Now, what do we do? Do we make for the rock in the middle of the pond and complete our mission or do we go back and deliver the non-swimmer?

Knowing we wouldn’t have another go if we went back, we pressed on regardless!

Then, shouts from the bank alerted us to another issue.

The neighbouring kids were coming down the hill – Sunny Bank on the pic.

We had a little time, and if we really made an effort, we may make it to safety, but our mission would have to be abandoned – and so would the raft!

Just before we got to the second rock – and relative safety – the raft gave up the ghost and tipped us into the water.

The non-swimmer went directly into panic-mode and tried to pull me and the other kid down to the depths with him. Fortunately, I could touch the bottom of the pond and he clung to me like a drowning man clutches at a straw.

It didn’t help our progress any and the first of the rival kids had arrived at the top of the path and were screaming their way down to us!

The rest of our lot (the dry ones) were told to go and they made a run for it. We abandoned the raft and made our way up the slope to the derelict house, squelching and sploshing, wellies filled with water and pond-weed.

The rival kids didn’t bother following us – I suppose there wasn’t much more punishment they could administer, since we were soaked and probably in for a thrashing when we got home.

They commandeered our raft and we made our way home, heads down in defeat and misery of the unaccomplished mission.

I never did get to set foot on that third rock.

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I think its truth !!

Don't we have to guess whether it is fact or fiction ?

Yes! Thank you for reading it all ;)

yaaeee !! I was right :D

Its all my pleasure dear :)

Not necessarily. I give the answer the following day :)

ohhhh okay !!! Will wait for tomorrow then :D

It was a pity the mission was not accomplished but the adventure is an interesting one.. The rivary and oneness made it fun

I'm guessing fiction in the sense that you did make it.

At first glance, I didn't understand the map. The trees looked like dimples.

this actually could be true

upvoted and resteemed

I'm sorry to hear that the previous story was completely true, but it's good that it played out well for you later!

This one sounds like a true story of kids having adventure and tribal wars with the other kids. :D

Sounds like a true story.

I like that

I think these are true events you modified it in a story form. Its great fact that during childhood one could do such type of mistakes, because at that stage there is not a vision of danger. So this story gives us a lesson that without planning and ability if some one do the things then there is a defeat and misery of the unaccomplished mission. thanks for posting.

Its a story of lesson. Its a real fact that at childhood there many blunders or mistakes were being done by all teenagers. If we remember those mistakes; then really regrets the mistakes. The story that is fact has a great lesson for the parents and also for the children. Your story is fact because the teenagers could do the similar mistakes as written in the story. thanks for sharing such a valuable post

This story even near the truch and it seems truth. Because even when we were remind our childhood; these stories repeated by many of us. Often when childs saw the water pond or canal or river during summer they want to swim but when something happens wrong then there is always loss of life. So the fact mentioned above is a lesson for the people and for the steemit community. This same story happened with my friend's kids; two sons drowned and at the same time two other brothers drowned. This is very nice post.

Well written. You are doing a great job. Thanks for sharing @michelle.gent

True story.
Resteemed and upvoted done

nice post dear

nice one

i appreciate your post..actually your post is very nice..you totally clear your concept of fact and fiction..resteemit..

goodv writing and explain that is
carry on guys

just resteem your post because i lke your post ...you shearing really amazing stories...

Childhood is beautiful friend ,, I like your story .. and I will follow you

Thanks for your article

I think this is a truth of your childhood.
You have explained this in very well manner. Thank you so much for sharing your childhood memories with us.

Maximum effort and more exciting, until muddy but not champion.
Thank you very much @michelle.gent

Amazing Adventure... I also want to go there :) but my exams are near :(

This is a: Fact imo Excited to know what it really is.

Yesterday's story turned out to be true, I think for many it was a surprise. But it's good that it ends well
Today's story is interesting and instructive ... children often make mistakes. After reading all I suppose that this story is True.
So it or not, we'll find out tomorrow, thanks

In my opinion it's True, because so far what I have learnt from your stories is, that you had very adventurous childhood. Always you come up with a surprising tale.

YAY, I got one right! (Unfortunately, sorry about that one.) Because I think most kids do stuff like this and have that feeling of invincibility at those ages, I'm going to say this one is true as well.

True! Although I realised I got yesterday's wrong dammit

False. But even your true stories are well embellished.
Upvoted & Resteemed.
Nick

Sounds true to me.

I think it is fact. Kids will be kids and my brothers and I did the same when we kids, only it was a river and not a pond.

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