Losing Yourself

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Losing Yourself

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Two of us.
Yet one knows how
to love more.

Only one knows how this
could be a forever
that might not last.

A part of us breaks,
to feel, that things
might get better,
that maybe love
would come back and stay.

Maybe things can be fixed.
Or maybe they'll
stay the same.

Your heart breaks,
your mind is a chaos
yet you live in
and out of love.

And people.
They tell you.
To save yourself.
To be your own hero.

But how can you,
when you can't let
your heart from breaking
and your mind from thinking right.

And because you're losing,
all that you wish
for is a forever in the
number of days you have.


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Great writing style i like it followed waiting for more

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Awesome writing , i truly related to this story as what your saying is so true

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I like, great job

An impressive poem

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This has existential angst and the truth of humanity woven deep between words. Thank you for sharing!

Thank you for you time to give it a read.
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Good poem @mindfreak. Not to be a spelling nazi, but it should be "Losing"

Oh yea yes. Thats a stupid mistake.
Thank you for read @sgtechservices
I love your poems too

No worries man. I just thought you'd like to correct it. Thanks for the compliment. I'm happy you enjoy my work too.

A wonderful poem yet again!

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I am glad you liked it

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wonderful
@saimamughal

And I am glad you did enjoyed this.
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Check here i guess there is an error.. Not sure tho.

But how can you,
when you can't let
your heart from breaking

I just wrote a poem on death. Fell free to check it out

Attractive poem sir

Thanks!

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You made me cry so much 😭💔 is like it was written deep from my soul. It touched me

Thats the best complement I could ever get.
I feel you here :")
Thank you so much

I'm reading it over and over again and realize that my heart is breaking so much, soon I'll have it break in atoms and yet, as you say, I can't run away because of that little part of me hoping it will be ok

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English/ Inglés

Love is a four-letter word, very complicated and often confuses us humans. Following and supporting you very good words. 100% Venezuelan

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beautiful words, together with the photo they took me far away, to my own thoughts... i will definitively keep an eye on your future poems, to see where they take me next.

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Splendid! Don't save yourself from love. Dare to love. All Love will teach you is Beauty and Grace and a bit more about Yourself.
https://steemit.com/love/@ruxonsteemit/my-twin-sisters-and-the-journey-of-being-the-bigger-sister
Blessings,
Ruxandra

wow nice poetry... that can be lyric for a song i think.
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