Losing Yourself
Two of us.
Yet one knows how
to love more.
Only one knows how this
could be a forever
that might not last.
A part of us breaks,
to feel, that things
might get better,
that maybe love
would come back and stay.
Maybe things can be fixed.
Or maybe they'll
stay the same.
Your heart breaks,
your mind is a chaos
yet you live in
and out of love.
And people.
They tell you.
To save yourself.
To be your own hero.
But how can you,
when you can't let
your heart from breaking
and your mind from thinking right.
And because you're losing,
all that you wish
for is a forever in the
number of days you have.
Great writing style i like it followed waiting for more
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Thanks for follow.
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Awesome writing , i truly related to this story as what your saying is so true
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Thank you so much :)
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Your words took me somewhere beautiful. Thank you for sharing :)
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I hope you enjoyed.
Thank you so much :)
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Yes. It would be a huge lie to say otherwise. You are most welcome! :)
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This post received a 1.5% upvote from @randowhale thanks to @mindfreak! For more information, click here!
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This participation is rich in important information, which gives answers to several questions, and this topic has an inquisitive nature, thanks to which some people can know all the details. Complete this path good luck ,thanks 👍
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Would love to learn to write poems this good. I found your poem inspiring
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I wrote a poem recently. Feel free to visit my wall
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Thank you so much @diamondgirl.
It feels great that my ppem can be inspiartion for someone :)
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I like, great job
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An impressive poem
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Thank you so much:)
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You're welcome
Can you visit my blog ?
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I had a look.
I followed you!
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thanks
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This has existential angst and the truth of humanity woven deep between words. Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you for you time to give it a read.
I am glad you enjoyed it, Please follow for more of such daily poems.
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Good poem @mindfreak. Not to be a spelling nazi, but it should be "Losing"
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Oh yea yes. Thats a stupid mistake.
Thank you for read @sgtechservices
I love your poems too
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No worries man. I just thought you'd like to correct it. Thanks for the compliment. I'm happy you enjoy my work too.
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A wonderful poem yet again!
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Thanks @poeticsnake for your read!
I am glad you liked it
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Incredible poem. The quality of the content on Steemit truly is second to none and it's only in its infancy. Keep posting, I followed with intentions of reading more of your work. Thank you!
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wonderful
@saimamughal
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And I am glad you did enjoyed this.
Thank you so much for follow :)
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Check here i guess there is an error.. Not sure tho.
But how can you,
when you can't let
your heart from breaking
I just wrote a poem on death. Fell free to check it out
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Attractive poem sir
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Thanks!
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Welcome sir
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Nice poem. Followed you peer writer!
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I am glad you liked it @anialexander.
Thank you so much for follow :)
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You made me cry so much 😭💔 is like it was written deep from my soul. It touched me
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Thats the best complement I could ever get.
I feel you here :")
Thank you so much
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I'm reading it over and over again and realize that my heart is breaking so much, soon I'll have it break in atoms and yet, as you say, I can't run away because of that little part of me hoping it will be ok
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nice post, visit my post, i have some poetry to you read..
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Thanks
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greaet i like your style
welcome to my blog @farhannaqvi7 where i give you happiness in just few second
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Spanish/ Español
El amor es una palabra de cuatro letras, muy complicada y veces suele confundirnos a nosotros los seres humanos. siguiendote y apoyandote muy buenas palabras. 100% Venezolana.
English/ Inglés
Love is a four-letter word, very complicated and often confuses us humans. Following and supporting you very good words. 100% Venezuelan
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I am glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for your comment :)
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beautiful words, together with the photo they took me far away, to my own thoughts... i will definitively keep an eye on your future poems, to see where they take me next.
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Thank you so much @dramalens :)
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Nice poem @mindfreak. I feel enjoy read your poem.
Regards
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Relate to the poetry....great post !!Upvoted and following you :)
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Splendid! Don't save yourself from love. Dare to love. All Love will teach you is Beauty and Grace and a bit more about Yourself.
https://steemit.com/love/@ruxonsteemit/my-twin-sisters-and-the-journey-of-being-the-bigger-sister
Blessings,
Ruxandra
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wow nice poetry... that can be lyric for a song i think.
Regards..
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I followed you.. Follow back
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