ခ်စ္ေနတုန္းဘဲ

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မင္းမုန္းသြားလဲ ငါခ်စ္မယ္မိန္းကေလး
အခ်စ္ဆိုတာက မထူးျခားတဲ႔ဇာတ္လမ္းပါ
မင္းအတြက္နဲ႔ငါ အသက္ရွင္ေနတာမဟုတ္ဘူး
ဒါေပမယ္႔မင္းကိုငါခ်စ္တယ္ ဒါေတာ႔အမွန္ဘဲေပါ႔
မင္းကမုန္းေနတာမဟုတ္ဘူူးဆိုတာလဲသိတယ္
ငါ႔အခ်စ္ကမင္းအတြက္ ဖီလင္မလာတာလဲသိတယ္
မင္းအတြက္ေတာ႔ငါက ဘာမွမဟုတ္တဲ႔ဖြဲ
ငါ႔အတြက္ေတာ႔မင္းက အေသရရအရွင္ရရ
ရယူပိုင္ဆိုင္ခ်င္ခဲ႔တာေပါ႔ မင္းမွမခ်စ္တာ္ေလ
သိပ္လဲ စိတ္မေကာင္းမျဖစ္နဲ႔ အခ်စ္အတြက္ငါ
ဘ၀ပ်က္မသြားဘူး ခ်စ္ေနတာဘဲသိေစခ်င္တာ
မင္းအတြက္ေတာ႔ ဘာမွလုပ္မေပးနိုင္ေတာ႔ဘူး
မင္းက ထြက္လို႔သြားတဲ႔ရထားတစ္စီးလိုပါဘဲ
ေမွ်ာ္ေငးေနသူငါ႔အတြက္ေတာ႔ ဟာတာတာ ရင္မွာက်န္ေနခဲ႔
ရတယ္ေလ ေအာ္ အခ်စ္မွမရွိေတာ႔တာ လြမ္းတာေပါ႔
ဘာလဲ လြမ္းေနတယ္ဆိုလို႔ မင္းမေက်နပ္ေသးဘူးလား
ဒါေတာ႔ငါလဲ မတားဆီးနိုင္ဘူးေလ
ငါ႔ႏွလံုးသားကိုငါမညာခ်င္ဘူး မင္းကိုေတာ႔ခ်စ္ေနတုန္းဘဲ
လိုက္လာမယ္လို႔ေတာ႔မထင္ပါနဲ႔ ဘယ္ေတာ႔မွ သူတစ္ပါး
နမ္းျပီးသားပန္း ေကာက္မယူတက္ဘူး
ခ်စ္ေတာ႔ခ်စ္တယ္ ဒါေပမယ္႔မာနေလးေတာ႔ရွိတယ္ေလ
ငါ႔အတြက္ ဒုတိယလူလို႔ စာရင္းေပးခိုင္းေနတာလား
သြားလိုက္ပါမိန္းကေလးေရ မင္းကိုငါ လက္ခံဖို႔
အခြင္႔မေပးလိုက္ပါဘူး။ ခ်စ္ေတာ႔ခ်စ္ေနတုန္းဘဲ

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      ·  7 years ago 

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      ေက်းဇူးတင္တယ္

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        ·  7 years ago 

      This post has received gratitude of 0.84 % from @appreciator thanks to: @mm7.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        ေက်းဇူးအမာ်းၾကီးတင္တယ္

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Thanks you.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          အစြဲအလမ္းကၾကီးလိုက္တာ

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              ·  7 years ago 

            ဟား ဟုတ္ပါဘူး

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              ·  7 years ago 

            ဆရာျကီးဘဲ

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                ·  7 years ago 

              ဘဒိုက ပိုဆရာက်ပါတယ္

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                ·  7 years ago 

              good par tal naw

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                ဟုတ္ကဲ႔

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