[NSFW Text] "Our first night, part 1"

in writing •  8 years ago  (edited)

The following is an excerpt from the yet untitled erotic fiction novel I'm writing.

Context: Two lonely strangers, living on opposite sides of the planet start flirting with each other on an online dating discussion board, moving on to private messages soon thereafter.

"Our first night, part 1" (One of his messages to her):

I didn't expect you to mount me right away, but I'm definitely into it. I'm sure you must be feeling my enthusiasm pressed against you.

There's not much I love more than making out, and it seems I've found someone who enjoys kissing as much as I do. I'm dumbfounded by just how in sync we are. Our lips and tongues appear to have rehearsed an intricate and beautiful choreography in secret, now performing it flawlessly, while our bodies react in harmony to each other's movements and our hands caress every inch they can reach, becoming ever more daring in the places they venture.

After half an hour of passionately making out, you still on top of me, I finally move my hands under your shirt and along your back, then to your waist as I begin slowly lifting up your shirt.

Your breathing quickens as you take hold of my wrists and support the upwards motion, to take away any and all of my doubts as to whether you're ready for this, or not.

You weren't wearing a bra, so now I'm graced with the most beautiful view in the world. I run my hands along your waist and up, then grasp your nice, firm breasts, as you softly moan.

You unbutton my shirt as we continue kissing, and once it's off, we go into a tight embrace, our bodies pushed against each other as we kiss each other’s necks and you start grinding on my lap.

I reach down your back, under your pants and get a hold of your perfect ass.

You get up, take off your pants, pull me up towards you, and kneel down on a pillow in front of me. You slowly remove my jeans and underwear, which were the only things remaining at that point, and are left without a shred of doubt about my feelings towards you, as that proof literally jumps out at your face and hits your nose.

After we had a good laugh about that bit of slapstick pun intended, you start off by licking my shaft up and down.

I realize that it's been a while for me and I've been continuously hard ever since we sat down on the couch, so this will probably not take very long. I tell you, and ask if I should warn you before I come. You giggle, answer "no worries" with a wink, and start French kissing the tip.

Your skillful tongue and lips feel so good, and once you start taking it in deeper, I'm done for. I lightly grip the back of your head, fingers spread in your hair, as I start coming in your mouth. I'm considering myself the luckiest man on earth in this moment, as you not only don't draw back, but continue like nothing happened until I'm completely finished. You gag just a little bit as you swallow, but that was probably down to the sheer volume of what I had saved up for you.

You look up to me and grace me with your beautiful smile, as I take your hands and pull you up. I embrace you, and we kiss passionately for a while, before I hoist you up, carry you to the bed, and lay you down on your back.

With me lying on top of you, we stare into each other’s eyes, and your gaze lets me know you want to finally become one, but even though I can hardly wait for that either, I make you wait a little while longer.

I kiss your soft lips once more and continue down your neck, while running my free hand along your body.

I slowly slide down on you, still kissing every inch of your skin along the way, and pause shortly around your belly button, while caressing your breasts, feeling your hard nipples between my fingers.

As I venture further south, I can feel your heat on my face and catch a whiff of your intoxicating smell.

I start kissing your leg at the knee, and work my way down until I've finally reached your perfect pussy and start licking and kissing your lips up and down. I love your taste.

With one hand, I softly grip your clit between your outer lips and start slowly jerking you off. Your movements and moaning let me know I'm on the right track. As I'm circling the tip of your clit with my tongue, I slide my other middle and index finger into you, turn them upwards, and start making a come hither motion towards my face. You grab the back of my head and push me against you as hard as you can without impeding my efforts.

All of this at once has you writhing and screaming in pleasure, as I can feel your thighs shaking against my ears, while I'm trying to stay on track and follow your gyrating hips.

I'm not even thinking of stopping, as feeling your pleasure turns me on more than anything else. So I continue on until you can't take it anymore and beg me to finally enter you, with which I happily comply, of course.

I climb back on top of you and we kiss once more, while you grab my throbbing cock and pull me inside of you...

Let me know if you want to read more, and if you'd prefer to read the whole story, or just the spicy bits.

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