Hey writers!
I made a post about my childhood where I innocently swallowed * ******!
I wonder if it is too graphic or if I need to change anything. I would love your feedback
https://steemit.com/writing/@pippininja/innocence-is-bliss-or-is-it
I'm not really a writer but I get inspired sometimes. Everyone I've told this story to has had a physical reaction to it. So, I need help with making it read-worthy.
Thank you all in advance.
Not a thing needed to be changed. The booger was the cringe-worthy finale your whole story was leading up to. It still makes me shiver in revulsion! Like watching a horror movie or something of that nature where you keep thinking, 'It was gross, and soooo much fun!'.
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Thank you so much for your critique! AND for sharing my link! I'm so glad you appreciated my story! I still swallow and imagine something thick in my throat whenever I think about it! I'm at work but I'll check out that video you sent me when I'm on break. The computer I'm on blocks all pics and videos.
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It was a good story, and you deserve a round of applause for writing it! I wish I could have done more to get people to read it.
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@pippinija, you need to see the post I am providing the link to. It will clear up any doubt you have.
https://steemit.com/funny/@josephmcconnell/boogers-are-beautiful
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