Crowd Story - Chase & Follow - Contribute to the Story in the comments

in writing •  7 years ago  (edited)


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I start a story and you continue in the comments where the last person left off. I provide a setting, characters and the start of a plot. Together we create a story that would ordinarily be unimaginable.

NUMBER your posts to keep these more organized for compiling. Be advised some stories contain course language.


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"The rain comes down intermittently, the odd drop hits me on the nose. It's annoying, should have worn a hat. I'll make note. Maybe I should just look for a new career? Private Investigator, ha. They can call me a gumshoe, a P.I. a Dick. Maybe It's the clientele?" CAMERON (28) ponders to himself as he waits on a bench in the middle of the park.

"There she is..." Cameron waits for the WOMAN (30's) to pass by and create some distance before he begins to follow her. The rain eases and she hangs her umbrella off her purse while she casually walks along the park path and onto the street, crossing into an alley way.

Right behind her, Cameron quickens his pace so he doesn't lose her in the downtown arteries. He stomps through the puddles and as she turns a the corner of the alley way, Cameron Jogs to catch up.

As Cameron slows down and makes his way around the curve he comes face to face with a small pistol held at him by the Woman.

"Now, Catherine, you don't want to do that..." Cameron says, taking a deep breath as she cocks the hammer back.

Catherine smiles, she giggles a little as she responds, "...."

<3 @satchmo

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#1 - "Oh common Cameron. I taught you better than that." Catherine said with a wry smile, "You were like a Fucking elephant trying to sneak up on a mouse!! Now let me hear you squeal like one!!!" Catherine pulled the trigger, CLICK, "Jesus Catherine," Cameron sighed, finally letting the air out of his lungs "I thought this time I'm done!! You can't do that shit to me." Catherine suddenly exploded and with one smooth motion sweeped his feet right out from under him. Before Cameron could even react she was ontop of him with a knife stuck to his throat. "Well Cameron, if this is the best you have there is no way you're going to get to your target. I suggest you learn and learn REAL quick. Everyday you waste is another victims life!" she sneered.With that Catherine got up and walked away.

"Shit" Cameron thought, "If I can't do it I'm done, the city is done!!" Cameron got Catherine to help him but she...

I was wondering @satchmo, since this story didn't take off quite as nicely as your previous one did how you'd feel about it if I kinda carry on rolling with it? You know, perhaps do it as a story post broken up into chapters. What do you think, hmmm?

If you'd like to take this particular story and develop it into an actual short im totally cool with that. Crowd Story will be getting a re-vamp.

Cool, thanks :):) I'll keep an eye out for your revamped edition :) Cheers!!

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