Post Feedback: Win upvotes and Steem

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Hello
I wrote this post five days ago and I am looking for feedback.
Here is the link: https://steemit.com/motivation/@shortsegments/the-past-the-present-and-the-future

I would like to know how it could be improved or if any of the points could be better explained.
I will upvote helpful replies and provide prizes in the form of Steem for the most helpful feedback.
Thanks

@shortsegments

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You could make a Dtube video or even Youtube recovering it.

That’s a good idea. Do you use Dtube? Is it a dapp on Steemit?

I've used it a few times.
https://d.tube/

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