Hi Everyone!
I'm SO excited to share this wonderful news with you!!
As most of you know I belong to @mariannewest's #freewrite group.
I have been having a ball writing short stories and interacting with all the freewriter's every day.
A week ago I wrote a story based on the prompt Gullible. I posted it like I always do. That night I received a comment from a fellow freewriter that made my heart so happy. @f3nix's comment was to tell me he liked my story so much he was going to read it to his niece that night before bed.
I was so honored by that comment. To have one of my stories liked enough, to tell it to a family member, just meant the world to me.
It also got me thinking!! which can be a dangerous thing!
A few days later as I was reading people's freewrites I noticed that @fireawaymarmot had COOL photo's that went perfectly with his freewrites. I left him a comment about it thinking how lucky he was to have the talent to draw!
After that day, I couldn't get the thought out of my head of how COOL it would be to have pictures to go along with one of my stories.
I did try. I'm a horrible drawer. I can do many things but drawing is not one of them!
So, I thought about it and thought and decided to ask @fireawaymarmot if he would be willing to make some drawings for me to go along with my Gullible Berney story. He could only say No!! BUT he didn't!
Tonight I was checking my comments and I got the BEST gift of all. Five drawings to go with my story!!
From there, things went a bit cRazY here! and I made a video of me saying the words "ahhhh", "and" & "Uhmmmm" way too many times! but at the end of the video, I got to read my story along with the drawings that go with it!
I hope you enjoy the video and if you don't have time to watch it I will be posting the full story and photo's under it.
If you just want to see the reading of Gullible Berney, click on the 6:00 and it will take you right to it!
Gullible Berney
Gullible Berney lives in a tree asking for candy from whoever stopped by.
He loved his tree. It was on a path that people walked more than Joanie's path, so he knew without a doubt, that he got more candy then Joanie.
Little did he know, Joanie was a firecracker, and had a stash of candy for her own, that she got from Berney.........tho Bernie was none the wiser.
She had dug a hole in the back of his tree and every day would take 1/2 of what Berney got.
She knew Berney was too trusting. He was called gullible for a reason...........
One day when he mentioned about his candy going down so fast, Joanie told him that candy deflated after a while, so he really had the same amount but it just looked like less.
Berney believed her and even shared his candy with her so Joanie would not have to eat deflated candy........cuz who wants THAT!
One day Fred came by and dropped off some candy to Berney. He asked Berney about his candy and what did he do with it all.....
Berney, slowly explained, cuz he was talking to a human you know! about the candy deflating and how he ate, every day, as much as he could. How he shared his candy far and wide before it was deflated.
Fred feeling so bad for Gullible Berney.........and being taken for a ride by everyone it would seem..........asked Berney to come live with him.
He had a nice place and was a bit lonely sometimes and then Gullible Berney could have all the candy he wanted! Whenever he wanted.
Berney not being stupid, just gullible, asked for time to pack his belongings. He would be ready in two sec's but would there be an address I can write down for my friends to find me?
Fred said, "Of course! Just leave a note saying you are living with Fredrich William Wonka."
Gullible Berney lived happily ever after.
Thank you for watching and reading!
Love to All!
Snook
This is so good! Collaboration between steemians, I love it!
The story is very likeable, and even educational. You have a good reading voice too :D
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Thank YOU!!! @marcoriccardi :D it IS very COOL that THIS story was not just about me :D to me it made it even MORE special and always will be!
and Thank you about my voice! I'm very happy it didn't send everyone away screaming from the sound of it! LOLL
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I'm glad I was able to help out with this; the reading was quite nice.
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Thank You!! for everything !! :D
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This is SO awesome!!! I love the drawings and not gonna lie, I've considered asking one of my daughters to illustrate a future story that I'm wanting to post.
Your enthusiasm and excitement is absolutely contagious. I LOVE this post!
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Thank You so much @byn!!! I was so happy how it all came together and getting the drawing when I did was a big surprise! and I just could NOT contain my happiness :D I HOPE it carries over on to YOU and your wonderful stories too!!
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Thank you :) I'm working on something new that has me nervous as all get out (and I don't GET nervous, so it's really weird!) but I'm very much enjoying reading everyone's stuff today and am just SO freaking thrilled for you because I keep seeing your name mentioned elsewhere, too! :) You're doing incredible things!
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Those pictures are brilliant!! They work so well with the story. I love that you read it! Story Time with @snook!
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:D have YOU and @ecoinstant been talking? LOLLL
and I LOVE the photo's too!!
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Fabulous work, both @snook and @fireawaymarmot (your drawings amaze me). Really nice to see you snook and your voice is perfect for the story you wrote: you are indeed a storyteller! 😛
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Thank you so much @felt.buzz. Your comment and support means the world to me and I'm so happy you liked it as I am very proud how it all turned out.....even with the 20 and's, uhmm and stuff...... LOLL but that IS me so I left it all there. LOLL My son called it the directors cut while trying to nicely tell me it was too long! :D Got to love your kid for trying not to hurt your feelings!
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This synergy between freewriters is simply amazing..compliments @snook and @fireawaymarmot ..this is a clear example that when it's about creativity 1+1 is equal to 3! Im happy dear Snook that I motivated you ..My niece, Allegra (5 yrs old little angel) now will enjoy not only a story but even the beautiful pictures :-) This confirms that this community has a great potential. We need a discord chat I guess ..
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Thank you so much @f3nix for everything!!
and yes we do but I don't know anything about even how we would do this :(
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We'll figure out, I've a feeling that it's much easier than what we think ;-)
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You're reading was very soothing.
I was surprised how people right away came visiting my freewrites, great people. Go freewriters!
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Thank You!! for watching and your wonderful comment!
I LOVE that!! :D
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The illustrations are perfect! I'm so happy that your story is going to be passed on and loved like it should be! Congratulations, @snook!
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Thank You so much @brisby!! I'm very happy right now!! :D
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This is awesome! Incredible! I love the images! And the Doctor Seuss voice!
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yaaaaaaaaaaaay :D I LOVE You!!
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The illustrations go really well with the story.
Go Bernie!
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Thank you @doctorcrypto!! :D I was so happy when I got them! @fireawaymarmot did such a great job!! I'm So happy you think so too!
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How delightful!! What a 'sweet' tale. i love the illustrations!
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Thank You so much!! and for the 'sweet' comment that made me laugh too!
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