3 Tips to Finally Get That Novel Written, from a 2x Published Novelist

in writing •  7 years ago 

Hello. I'm an author. I assume you are, too, or at least desire to be. Welcome. It's nice to meet you. Hopefully, I can help you finish writing that novel you've started, or are thinking of starting. We'll be good friends, you and I.

I've written and published two full-length novels in the past two years, and am halfway through writing a third. You can find a link to my author website on my blog profile here. The website has linked covers for both of my novels that take you right to Amazon, where you can buy them (gratuitous plug....both books are free the entire month of July on Smashwords, as a promotion). 

Getting to this point, where I'm excited about writing novels, as well as comfortable producing them, wasn't easy. It was frustrating for a long time, not doing the thing I knew I was meant to be doing. I'm sure you can relate.

I Wondered if My Novels and I, Crazy Kids That We Were, Would Ever Get Together

You see, it's been my stated goal since high school to make a living as a novelist. In fact, my bio in the program for my local community theater's production of "The Pajama Game," which I did the summer between my junior and senior years of high school, plainly states my goal is to be a famous novelist and live a wonderful, happy life doing it. I've got the program saved; I can prove it. :)

Despite creatively writing since elementary school, and winning numerous awards and even a college scholarship doing it, getting that first novel written was so much harder than I thought it would be. It certainly took longer....like, YEARS longer. 

It's not for lack of trying. I have drawers full of half-finished manuscripts I just gave up on. All through high school, college, and my 20's, I tried to write an entire novel to completion, and just couldn't manage it.

Why?

It turns out I was going about the process all wrong, at least for me. 

You see, each writer has their own process. I just had to find mine, and believe me, it took a while, with a lot of trial and error before I discovered it. Maybe your process is similar to mine, and you just don't know it yet.

If you want to write a novel and have a drawer full of unfinished manuscripts like I did, or if you want to write one but don't know how to get started, here are some tips I've learned on my path to publication that I hope will help you.

3 Tips to Help You Finally Write That Novel

Here they are, the tips! You might want to take notes. Or not. This is all about you and what works best for you as an author. I'll tell you, though, these tips really helped me, once I figured them out on my own. I wish someone had given ME this advice years ago. Learn from my mistakes, here, fellow authors.

1. Know Your Characters Inside and Out

This was actually the biggest reason I never finished a novel before 2015. I would get so far into a novel I was writing, and just couldn't complete it because I realized I had no idea who the characters actually were. I couldn't get inside their heads. Because of this, I had no way of knowing what an authentic reaction from one of them would be to any event, how they would speak to another character, what they thought about, nothing.

When you don't know your characters, they come off pretty damn bland on the page.

This was a huge problem for me. Even if I wrote a multi-page, detailed character description of each one that explored every single tiny thing about their personality and lives up to the point of the book, it didn't help me know them any better. Certainly not even close to well enough to write a book about them.

So, how did I fix it, and finally get inside my lovely little characters' heads?

I started basing them on people I already know. 

Now, this doesn't have to mean people I know in person. It doesn't even have to mean real people. Some of my characters are based on characters I know and love from favored TV shows. But, some of them have the personality traits of people I know.

Naturally, I insert myself into each book as a character, as well. Who knows me better than me? Besides, I want to take part in the fun.

The names are all different, of course, and I put them into situations they've never been in, either on TV or in real life, so it's all original. I'm using other people as inspiration, not straight up ripping off their lives or stories. That would be wrong (don't do it). 

Do original storylines, for God's sake. But, the cool thing about using characters inspired by other characters or real life people is that you KNOW them. You know how they would react, what they would say, and what they would think in any given situation, even if it is a new one for them, because you know them so well. It makes writing for them easy.

THAT is how you get into the heads of your characters, and THAT is the first step in finishing a novel. When you know your characters, they will come off more realistic, and your readers will feel like they know them, too.

2. Don't Think You HAVE to Have an Outline

I know, I know. Most writing teachers and instruction books say you have to have an outline. Well, I'm here to tell you that you don't. There are all kinds of different writing styles. Yes, there are some writers who swear by the outline, and it works well for them. Others are known as freestyle writers, and I'm one of them.

What is a freestyle writer? 

It's a writer who starts off with a general idea. Maybe he or she has a few ideas for scenes in the novel, or a definite thought on where the novel should go. Other than that, though, there is no outline.

I tried using outlines for years, and just got frustrated when I inevitably strayed away from it. I thought that meant I was no good at writing novels. It wasn't true, though, not at all. I just didn't realize I was a freestyle writer. 

My characters wanted to break free and go off in their own directions. I'd heard of this happening with other authors, but still thought you always had to come back to the outline, even if you had a brief jaunt away from it. I was keeping my poor characters as prisoners to the outline, and it wasn't working for them, or me.

Once I finally let go of the idea of a rigid outline, the words just flowed from me, almost effortlessly. My characters took the reins, and they led me in some pretty surprising directions. However, these were all good for the book. It made the book better, because I was allowing it to go where it naturally wanted to go, not where I thought it SHOULD go. 

The book I'm working on now, which is my third novel, has been one surprise after another for me. Each time I come to it, I have an idea of where it should go, and each time, my characters do something way different from what I thought I was going to write, and each time, it has been SO much cooler than my original idea. 

With this one, I genuinely can't wait to write on it every day, because it's like I'm reading it as I'm writing it. I want to see what happens next. I don't even know anymore. The characters are doing all the writing for me. I've given them total free rein here, even more so than in my first two books.

And, you know what? It's the best book I've written yet.

3. Make Sure You Write Every Day, Even if it's Only a Tiny Amount

Do you know what happens if you go a few days, or, God forbid, a week without writing at least something on your novel? You totally forget what was happening. You may have to go back a few pages to re-acquaint yourself with your story. You also lose the vibe of the story, and it may take a few days of working on it some more to get it back (or just a few pages, if you're lucky).

Plus, if you don't write regularly, and especially if you have long breaks between working on your novel, you are much less likely to finish it. Instead, you'll decide it's not that important, give up, and walk away, leaving your characters with their adventure unfinished. 

Don't do that to your characters. They depend on you to make their lives meaningful and interesting. And, they also want you to give them closure. Wouldn't you hate it if someone did that to you? Don't torture your creations this way (though, it's perfectly okay to torture them on the page as part of the story....don't worry, they expect it).

Because I'm a fast typist and incredibly OCD, so I like nice, round numbers, I personally try to go for 2,000 words a day. I also aim for approximately 100,000 words for each novel. That means, by writing 2,000 or so words every day, I can finish a novel in about a month and a half. 

Of course, that's just the first draft. Editing, re-writing, and more re-writing, and yet still more re-writing come after. You've got to refine your story. The most important thing, though is to finish that first draft. It's such a feeling of accomplishment, and lets you know you CAN DO THIS

I'll talk more about the importance of editing and re-writing (as well as how to do it) in another post. Writing posts are on Thursdays now, guys!

Just an FYI to throw in here about word count....A full-length novel is considered to be anything over 60,000 words. However, if it isn't at least 80,000, readers might not have enough material to really get into it. If you're a first-time author and your book is longer than 100,000 words, readers may not be willing to take a risk investing the amount of time to read a book of that length. They don't know how awesome you are yet, after all. Wait until the second book before going over 120,000 words. That's really the max you can get away with as a first-time author.

So, there you have it. Three powerful tips you can use today to start writing your novel, and to make sure you finish it. Don't let anyone, even yourself, tell you that you can't write a book. You absolutely can. Just find your own unique process, what works best for you, and go.

Are you committed to being an author? If you are, you won't let anything stand in your way, and you will write that book. Use these tips to help you get there. Then, let me know how they worked for you. They worked wonders for me. I'd love to know about how they helped you.

Now, go start writing!

If you enjoyed this post (and I hope you did), please take a moment to follow me here at @stephmckenzie to get more articles from me on life, the universe, and everything. Thank you!  

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Great Post! Very Informative :)
I've been wanting to write a book so quite a while now. But something always comes up then it gets delayed.

I'm so glad you found the post useful. You can do this. If you need any help or advice, or even motivation, just ask me.

This is really great information stephmckenzie. I up voted and RESTEEMED for you. Cheers.

Thank you so much, @crowe. That's very sweet of you. I appreciate it. :)

Welcome. You are an experienced writer we all need to learn from . Well Deserved.

You're awesome. Thanks so much. I appreciate the compliment AND the excellent advice.

Very Welcome. Take care.

One more thing, when you do re-post, you have to open your account in 2 separate windows so you can copy and paste one to the other.

Thanks. I'll give it a try with one of the more popular older posts and see how it does this time. :)

Good Luck. If you have any questions feel free to ask.

Thank you. :)

excellent post, thanks for the advice....I needed it

I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Hi @stephmckenzie. I loved this article. I thought your tips were fabulous. Im an author too but mine are non-fiction. But you know what. My last one called Ride the Wild Dragon wrote itself freestyle like you said. And it waws a wild ride to write. You've really tantalized me about the possibility to writing a novel. I've never seriously thought about novel writing, but letting the characters take the story is just very powerful Diana Gabaldron writes somewhat that way by writing an excerpt, and she doesn't quite know how it is all going to come toether. Thanks for sharing. Would you share your "last name" on your angel book. I would love to read it. Thanks.

I'm glad you liked the article. My author website is listed on the main page of my blog here (just go to my profile). I write fiction under the name Stephanie Woods (McKenzie is what I use to write non-fiction).

The books I have out so far in the world of fiction are "Earth Angel" and "Angel on My Shoulder." I am currently writing the third book in that series, which is called "Angels in Flight."

I'm also concurrently writing a new novel in a new series. It was going to be a standalone, but became the basis for a series, thanks to the characters themselves taking it in that direction. I don't have a name for the new series yet, but the first book in it, which I'm about 2/3 of the way done with the first draft, is called, "Sarah, Returned."

Hopefully, I'll have both "Angels in Flight," and "Sarah, Returned" on the market by the end of the year. :)

Hi @stephmckenzie. I love "Earth Angel." I'm recovering from a medical procedure, and just had a blast reading Earth Angel on my phone - the kindle version. Loved it, loved it, loved it. I left a review for you on Amazon as well. I loved your characters, and the multiverse you created as well. Certainly in line with my own experience - most of it anyway. (snicker). I don't see angels with my physical eyes, but I have seen my son't guardian angel in my dreams, and I have also seen an angel that kept telling me to wake up - on the day I went into the hospital 10 years ago. Their eyes are just as you describe them in the book.

Back to your book, I so enjoyed a new version of the fight between good and evil in a different context. And I loved how you empowered Lucy with powers that she didn't even know she had. I love paranormal, fantasy, sci fi fiction, and am always finding kernels of truth in them about new realities.

So thanks for the delightful experience. I'm looking forward to your 2nd one, but didn't see it on Amazon.

Looking forward to seeing your new Sarah, Returned.

@wecanbesublime I'm so glad you liked it. It's my first published novel, so your high compliments mean a lot to me. There are more surprises in store in the Angels and Seers universe, and you'll discover some of them, and hints of ones to come, in Angel on My Shoulder, the 2nd book in the series.

Angel on My Shoulder is told from four different points of view, as it takes place in so many different locations, and Lucy can't be everywhere. You will find chapters narrated by Ella, Jonathan, Lucy, and Sam, which gives you more insight into each of these major characters. Keep an eye on Lucy's brother, Matthew, as well. While her other brother, James, does more in Book Two, there are hints of a BIG role for Matthew in Book Three (that I'm writing right now).

Here's the link for Book Two, Angel on My Shoulder. I hope you like it as much as you liked Earth Angel, and thank you so much for the review.

https://www.amazon.com/Angel-My-Shoulder-Angels-Seers-ebook/dp/B01MCZZL0N/ref=sr_1_1?ie=UTF8&qid=1500414672&sr=8-1&keywords=stephanie+woods+angel+on+my+shoulder

How wonderful to have the link. Thanks @stephmckenzie. I went right to Amazon and bought the book right way. Thanks so much.

You are a very strong writer. Well done on your first novel. I can't wait to get on to the next one. I love movies and TV episodes when the characters become so real that they step out of their domain. Did you see the Start Trek Episode "Ships in a bottle" where Moriarty steps off the Holodeck because he is sure that he is real.? Or do you remember when Geordi recreates the inventor that helped create the ship, and then begins to fall in love with her. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Booby_Trap_(Star_Trek:_The_Next_Generation)

I think I wrote to you that Diana Gabaldron works that way too in her writing letting the character do a scene/ I think I saw that on You Tube.

Can't wait until I see your book where the characters take over the plot direction. You are very welcome for the review. You deserve all that I said and more.

Thank you for ordering the second book. I hope you enjoy it.

I haven't watched much Star Trek....a little, but not much. I'm more of a Doctor Who girl (well, until they just announced they're making the character a woman after 53 years of him being a man....it just seems too much like a different character entirely for me to watch that). But, I DID see an episode of The Librarians (awesome show, by the way), where Moriarty came out of a book and took on a life of his own, and teamed up with a villain from one of Shakespeare's plays, who also came out of a book as a real person. The Librarians then had to work together to defeat them. It was pretty cool.

Let me know what you think of the second book. I think you'll like it. And, you'll have something to look forward to with the third book, which I hope to have out around the end of October. :)

nice friend you are good as always..keep it up

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

I am touched to see your ability to understand things and writing on a subject in depth.. Love to get a good friend like you probably we will sure exchange our life experience ..with due respect i love your post and upvoting the same

Thank you, @shivani. I appreciate it. It is very nice to meet you, too. I'm sure we'll talk some more on this delightful platform.

Oh man, I love it. I never had the dream of becoming a writer until I created my steemit account. Right now I'm trying to write the first chapter of my first "novel" ... I'm still not sure what it is or what it will be, but this really helped me.

I'm so glad! If I can help someone learn by letting them know what worked for me, that makes me very happy. I'd love to have a look at your writing sometime.

Really? I would love it as well. I always welcome some advice. I just posted it but my native language is not english... If you want, you can go to my blog and copy it in google translate or wait till tomorrow when i post it in english?

I'll have a look. :)

Wow this is awesome & so thorough!

Thank you. I'm glad you like it.

thanks for sharing

My pleasure. Glad you liked it.

Awesome advice, I'm bookmarking this.

Cheers!

I'm so glad you liked it. :)

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