The Ward
I pause in silenced thoughts while I coax
the weary embers that sulk in the kitchen hearth
to study your features which are calm now as
you enter your third day of slumber.
how I wish you would stir.
fever clings to you with a mercenary grip,
yet you battle its hold with a most curious strength.
herbs and tonics I have tendered upon you
chanting in earnest prayer while you murmur
irrationality in weakened reply.
show me the bright boldness of your hazel eyes;
tell me of your quests and glorious journeys.
I will you to wake and breathe in the dampness
of this very morning's air.
I keep you as my ward, dark Armel, until
the malignance that crushes inward subsides.
I will bathe your brow in cool waters and
sing to you of the meadow's dancing winds.
arise now and partake of this humble broth and bread,
drink of my wine and speak to me in foreign tongue;
and when you grow strong once again here in
this poor thatched hovel, you may take your leave
or you may dwell here in my love for a spell longer.
Copyright Tina Jordan All Rights Reserved
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I LOVE IT! Omg that's beautiful and I love love LOVE the subtly within the rhymes and the rhythms. You write beautifully Tina :) Resteeming xx
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Thank you so much! <3
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Reggie isn't ill is he? sending love and prayer.
Melissa
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Reggie has dementia, but not ailing otherwise at the moment. This piece actually came from a dream a few years ago. :)
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glad to hear that ..thought it might have been a recent reflection...i love writing it is timeless...Tell me what you think of my recent poem...you write so well just want a look see...not fishing for a vote.
Thanks,
Melissa
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Of course! My pleasure to read.... :)
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Thanks so much for stopping by <3
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of course! Happy day!
melissa
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Gorgeous words @tinajordan !
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Thank you very much! :)
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Good work and nice word and hope for more success
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Thank you :)
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You are damn good with words!
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Once in a while lol. Thanks so much!
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you have your own distinctive voice - that's important. People can pick up one of your poems and say this is a Tina Jordan poem.
I'm thinking that you like to tell stories in your poetry. Narrative poems are rare if they're good and yours are. Do you know Margaret Atwood? You remind me of her. You should see what she does in The Journals of Susanna Moodie- You can do that - string together a cycle of poems and tell a story
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I'm not familiar with her, but certainly will have a look! Thanks again for your kind words :)
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