RE: Critique This, Tell Me If I Should Continue... Need Advice

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Critique This, Tell Me If I Should Continue... Need Advice

in writing •  7 years ago 

Wow! I really do like it. You tell your story in a 'slam beat poetry' sort of way. It has it's own aggressive undertones that really sell the mood. =) Good job & keep it up!

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Thanks, I appreciate your feedback and your upvote. I just briefly touched on subjects, but I'm wanting to start a series of blogs on people's life experiences. Looking to reach deeper and give it more detail and focus on specific life events. Would you find that interesting?

The way you write, yes! It's refreshing and stylistic.