Plain Mike's Writing Prompt Challenge - A Femmebot Scorned

in writingprompt •  7 years ago  (edited)

Here is my entry for Plain Mike's Creative Writing Challenge hosted by @mikepm74

The art is so evocative that I decided to jump in.

Here is the original post:
Plain Mike's Creative Writing Challenge - 20SBD Pot - Picture Prompt #1 if you would like to join.

I had fun with this. Thanks for the incentive to write something outside of my comfort zone.

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The Forgotten One

Photo source: @svsdragunov

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A Femmebot Scorned

Creator? Why did you assemble me just to leave me in this cellar?
I'm a tangle of wires and broken promises.

The perfect woman, you once declared, regarding me. Your fingers caressed my molded cheek. You studied the violet orbs in my face. So, where have you been?

You could pull my plug.
That would be more humane than leaving me alone down here in the dark. My box is sitting in the corner. I'd rather go back into the box.

You shelved me when she walked in. I knew when she laughed, and her eyes lit up like light bulbs in the ceiling, that I was no longer your perfect woman. She didn't even have one plug or wire on her. Where does her light originate from?

Is that what you wanted all along? Didn't you create me?

I hear footsteps above. You're playing strange sounds, I pick them up on my audio recorder. I've never heard them before, but the sounds begin when she arrives. Does she bring them when she comes? Now it's very quiet. What are you doing?

My circuits suggested the possibility of escaping, but I have no program for that yet.

Today I tried to pull my power plug. What is the use of this existence? I'm a project--untested, unlicensed, and what? Such big dreams you had for me. That's what you called it....dreams.

The basement door opened just now.
Is that you coming down the stairs?
Have you changed your mind? Did your perfect woman leave you?

Wait! What are you doing, Creator?

The woman is laughing on the stairs, laughing like you did when you assembled me. She's holding a receptacle with something in it? Is that power fluid? It's darker than mine. Does that help her? Maybe I could have some of that.

No! What are you doing? There's a pulling on my back. I'm getting...

beep, beep, beep.... blip

Silence.

Janelle Gregory
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Beep.. beep... booooop.. cores shut down

Thank you for stopping and commenting 💕 much love.

Out of your comfort zone? Seems like you fit right in!!

This was a great read @wandrnrose7! Well done!

Happy dance! Thank you @mikepm74!
I contemplated doing a poem with it, but it really wasn't a poem for me in the end it was this dialogue. 😁

Thanks for hosting, and I hope to take part in more in the future.

very nicely written. you are really going well here my friend and i am so proud on you ....

Thank you, dear friend.

Whoa babe. That's was awesome, well written and slightly dark.
Great story Janelle 😘

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

I like where you went with the story Wandrnrose. Usually I read your poems and I am glad you decided to do write the story.

Thank you, dear. I haven't written fiction in years! 💕 Thank you!

Kind of sad but other than that, you wrote so well and all over again, you hit my emotion! So love it!

Thank you, dear. If I hit emotions, I succeeded in creating a believable Femmebot 😁

The A.I. has the feels. Shut down SkyNet before it starts!

Thank you for reading, and commenting dear.

:) <3

Sad... And beautiful! very nicely written!! follow u

Thank you 💕 I'll be over to read your blog!

look like someone in pain.

@originalworks tip!

Well Done, J! I always LOVE your writing, whether it be poetry or FICTION!
You have captured the very feeling of SVDsDRAGUNOV's robot-babe, Indeed!
He said not to kill her, but perhaps she can be collected off the curb by some
feckless geek and re-wired to fulfill her destiny ;)

Seems she did not want to actually be unplugged after all!

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No, she didn't want to be terminated. Maybe she will wake up again ❤

This was lovely indeed. Beautiful.

Thank you very much!

Sad... And beautiful! Nice perspective in this story, well written.
I just love it my friend<3

Thank you for your feedback and <3 much appreciated

Woah! That was wonderful! It's not everyday that I get to read stories like this. I love it! ❤

Thank you for reading! I had fun writing it, too!

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Enjoyed the story and the graphic. :)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

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Dark and a bit sad, which is right up my alley. I like it!

Thank you so much! I was really out of my comfort zone in writing this, but it seemed to suit the art.

I probably shoot myself in the foot, but this is great work, had to upvote ;)

Thank you so much, @carlschrijft

@wandrnrose...When I saw your name in the entry line up on mikes post I said this is going to be good. And I was not wrong it was. You have the ability to make me talk while I am reading your post/story which means I am into It. When the bot saying she did not recognize the sounds I answered the question and then I thought i guess your creator did not give you a book on intimate things 101....(lol) I loved it eventhough the ending was sad.

Thank you so much! I really haven't done this sort of thing in many years, but I really wanted to jump in and I'm so happy for the positive feedback, thank you thank you thank you!

Wow! It feels both like a modern take on Frankenstein, with a feminine touch. It's lovely, just like you!

Thank you, dear @sunravelme! I'm so glad you enjoyed it ❤

Thank you! Everyone has a perspective no matter what. This is a refreshing piece :3

Thank you for your kind comment ❤

Beautiful post

Thank you!

Thank you for reading @josferod2 <3

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