Well, I think it´s a good track! But nevertheless I´d like to make some remarks. Ideas (text and music) are more than ok. But in the mix I miss some mid-highs (they are there but a bit weak, aren´t they?) The deep bass (somewhat between 38 and 50 Hz I think), is a bit strong, especially, when it comes alone. But - as I said: I think it´s a good piece of work after all. And I´ll follow you now (upvote included). By the way: You might be interested in our community "Sound and Sound Design" here on Steemit. Details here: https://steemit.com/music/@rofilm/community-sound-and-sound-design
Anyway: have a good time and a great time! Rolf from the Czech republic