RE: [Eng/urdu]"SEC-S20W1 | My Business Ideas(Machinery bussiness)

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[Eng/urdu]"SEC-S20W1 | My Business Ideas(Machinery bussiness)

in -sc20w1 •  8 days ago  (edited)

Hello @aqeelkhan422

Thanks for sharing your post in "Dev's Teaching Team"

Here are the feedback and evaluation results:

Point 1. I am glad that your line of business is driving so you are already in business but you could make it shorter rather than stretching this point so long and wide. 1 /2

Point2. I know this business needs no partner so if you do it alone, that's perfectly all right. 1.5 /2

Point3. I agree you know all about business, partnership, and proprietorship business so you need no further suggestion. By the way, who is this person with whom you will do business in the hills? If you have mentioned this point that would give you some extra weightage. 1/2

Point4. I agree with you that an excavator can go high up in the mountains if you work up in the hills but don't you think it can work in the plains as well? 1 /2

Quality 1 /2

Score 5.5 /10

Thank you for posting your business ideas.

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Thanks dear @ dove11 for ur sugession .and i tried to much more better in next time