Hi,@daprado1999

Analysis of Mistakes and Errors:

1. Grammar & Sentence Structure:

   • Many sentences are long and complex, impacting clarity.
   • Incorrect punctuation, such as missing commas, creates confusion.
   • Example: "A good example of linear equations would be ax+ y = 0" → should be: "A good example of a linear equation is ax + by = 0."

2. Spelling Errors:

   • Errors like "supercript" (should be "superscript"), "equated" (should be "equaled"), and "deribe" (should be "derive").

3. Punctuation Errors:

   • Missing periods, inconsistent commas, and incorrect colons.
   • Example: "Real life scenario; Linear equations: A business driver charges $10 over 20km…" → should be: "Real-life scenario: A business driver charges $10 for the first 20 km and an additional $4 for each subsequent 10 km."

4. Inconsistent Terminology:

   • "Absolute inequalities" → should be "Absolute value inequalities."
   • "equation If Tom wants" → should be: "Equation: If Tom wants."

5. Formatting Issues:

   • Sections are not properly divided, making the article harder to follow.
   • Points like Task 4, Case 1, and Case 2 need clearer section headings.

6. Clarity & Structure:

   • Some explanations are unnecessarily lengthy and repetitive.
   • Real-life examples should be simplified and clearly explained.

7. Mathematical Errors:

   • Example: "Sorting out factors of -8 we should have (1,-8) (2, -4) (1, 8) (2, 4)" → this part is unclear and may contain unnecessary steps.

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Score: 5.5 out of 10

• Strengths: Good effort in applying real-life examples and explaining concepts.
• Areas for Improvement: Grammar, sentence structure, clarity, and organization need improvement.

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I have mentioned earlier that your posts are mostly accurate, but there were a few minor mistakes. My goal is not to criticize, but to help improve and learn from these challenges. Steemit is a platform for learning and growth, so please don’t take any of my feedback as criticism. Thank you for your understanding and continued efforts!